um....... ok first off i'm sorry about your uncle. and the story was really good, i liked the ending it was really sweet, i've read someone elses story that ended a bit like that.Keep writing!!!

oh ..... ahem....... wow that was very ahem......steamy..... but it was good all the same! that was very sweet of what James did ! This was a good chapter! keep writing!!!

oh... wow .... what are you talking about you can write sad chapters, or at least they are better than anything i could have written.. this is a nother good chapter! and i like the preview to the other one , its seema like another good one! Keep writing!!!!

oh wow this is another great chapter! and i think that that dream you had would make an excellent story its as if your brain was working while you were asleep and it was meant to be!keep writing!!!!

what are you talking about i loved the whole ball thing, you are really good at this ! Keep writing!

awwww......... this is such a good chapter, i really like it, and its not corny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awwwwwwwww.... she said yes, to be his date how sweet!!!And another good chapter!keep writing!!!

wowwwwwwwwww.......... that is a something, about the sex thing, but also this is a really good chapter, and i really like the chapter! Keep writing!!!!

hey girlie...i love your stories...they re really awesome...seriously!!please do continue to write on... thumbs up for this one...

please put all the chapters on....i like your stories but cant read them cause you wont put them on

I made it to your thank you list, even though I was internetless for a stretch and could read!! I like the ending, and I've been 'worn out' from writing. I take a little break and then eureka! I am ready to face the world of harsh criticism hidden behind anon. names. I stopped those though, because some people were WAY out of line.

Anyways, I liked it (naturally) and I hope your break is revitalizing you!

I can understand your hesitation in the scene between Lily and James. You know we all want it, but how to word it so it gives the greatest visual and emotional effect while remaining tasteful. That's a difficult balance to remain tasteful but to excite your readers. Some of my attempts either come off too dirty or just plain odd.

I hate writing sad chapters too, especially since I am not one to break down in the face of death. It takes a lot out of me to write sadness, and usually I have to put on really depressing music and dig deep inside of me to get the tears to flow. (This coming from someone who was considered clinically depressed as a teenager). It's hard, definitely to write sad stuff, but the happy stuff can be too... I hate when it sounds too happy, to bright, too cheerful and corny.

You've done a good job here, though.

i like how Sirius turn into the girl so Lily would laught. This story is my favorite story. write soon Officially Unengaged i thought the idea was a good one.

I'm sorry to hear about your family. I hope everything turns out ok during the surgeries.

This was a really good epilogue. I liked how you turned it into Remus telling the story to Harry. I can't wait for Officially Unengaged. I understand that you need some time off. Once you feel ready, we'll all be here waiting.