i had a little typo with my last review.

the part where i write " i'm not saying it's not well written because it's not!"

i meant to write " i'm not saying it's not well written because IT IS!"

sorry about that... trust me it is! i've just been thinking a lot lately.

sorry for being distracted. i hope i didn't hurt your feelings because i don't intend to do so...

once again sorry,

smile_monalisa

i'm not entirely comfortable with them calling each other "babe" or "baby". it doesn't seem like them at all... i'd prefer "love".

i was also surprised by the way hermione talked to harry in this chapter... i'm sorry to say this but at first it doesn't sound like her at all!

but i still love your story. just a little mistake here and there.

good job though. i hope my review will help you in your later fics.

i'm not saying it's not well written because it's not!

good job though,

smile_monalisa

p.s. i hate ron.

Not to mention cute... I loved the Harry and Emily part. I've always wanted my husband to be like my kids (when I get married that is; in like 10 yrs.).... It's too cute

*%* Susanna *%*

Aww that was too cute. I loved this little story you put up here and I can't wait to read the epilouge....

*%* Susanna *%*

This was a good chapter. I loved how you ended it and I can't wait to read the next chapter you have up.... _

*%* Susanna *%*

Ok seriously, it got too mushy at the end but I think thats brought on my the exclamation marks. Drop them, all of them. Have someone beta for you so you stop with the !. Its annoying and just makes it feel fake and crappy.

Nice start to the story so far. Nothing too out of the ordinary, but you actually got the word conscience right instead using conscious! It's amazing how many authors use these two words interchangeably. It's become almost a pet peeve of mine. Keep up the good work!

I totally agree with you that SHE is precious, but many, many other authors seem not to see as you do. For they DO Love to write some other ways around, they DO Love to write as if HE was the most desireable man of all but make HER nothing and pathetic, Always. You can see it in many stories which, although they are undenying wonderful, HER characteristics in them were plentiful and boring.

Looking forward to your next awesome story soon.

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Aww. Cute. I loved it.... Really I can't wait until I'm able to read more after I read the chapter's you've already put out because I know they're going to be good.

*%* Susanna *%*

thats was sooooooooooooooooooooo sweet! when harry broke down and said that he was sad that she wasnt in his life anymore, and that he missed her that made me want to cry! and the part where harry got jealous bc of ron well that was pretty hot! great job!

Awwwww
how cute was this?!!!
i loved the storyy!!
i cant wait to hear more from you!!
good job!!

Quick note, drop the exclamation points. Theyre over used too much and make for a crappy read

I loved the ending it was really beautiful and sweet.

Fast update with 4 chapters at a time! Your narrations were wonderful especially HIS POV. I loved when you wrote about HIS jealousy. Also, you made HER the way I've always wished to see but hardly found. You made HER precious and beloved. And your ending was sweet. Applaud!

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thanks for the update - looking forward to reading more of this fic soon