JTUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/06/07
Hey the fluff was fun. I'm not a fan of the song fic parts, so the last line was a bit cheesy, but it's expected, right..? LoL. Otherwise it was fun, eh. Quite a deal for her to offer, too. LoL. (o: |
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JulesySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/07
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DARN YOU!!!
This song, I had heard it a grand total of twice. My guy friend beign drunk and singing something incoherent about raining and umbrella's I later recognised the tune when I hear it on the radio. So I thought well I'll download it to you know...get the meaning of the story...Its been on repeat for the last 2 hours and I finished your story ages ago and now decided to review it.
I liked it, not loved, but liked it. A) If was fluff, what H/HR shipper doesn't love a bit of fluff (espeacially fluffy Smut!!). B) What female doesn't swoon at the idea of a guy saying that they love someone (or in this case Harry telling Hermione). C) Its turned out to be a damn good song choice for the story.
Now I must go burn a different song into my head.
Thanks a lot. =op
Kudos.
-J |
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spOokyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/07
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I like it, I know I definately needed some fluff in my life. I love how you incorperated the rain and dancing... it was great. and I actually find it kind of ironic- the weather here.. somewhat- it was raining pretty much all week- all gloomy and all until the saturday- it was sunny and warm and has been since - completely opposit to my feelings. heh... anyways this is suppose to be a review of your amazing story- not meghan's time to woe in self pity. lol... wow I'm out of it.
I love the story though Kourtz, it's great. I don't understand the whole part with the "three months too late" like I have an idea but I'm not sure
please explain that and it's great
keep it up
luv the writing
-megz- |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/07
This story was beautiful. I love the song and it all came together very well. I think it wouldn't have been better but it might of been useful to actually descibe how they started sleeping together. |
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huhuhuhu the last phrase... It wasn't really necessary... hauhauahu it was... lol komish!
hauahu
OK... cool, like it!
But still I CAN'T stop laughing evrytime I read this ella, ella, eh, eh, eh hauahu |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/07
Pretty good for a little one shot. I really liked it. Keep up the good work. |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/07
"It’s fluff, I figured I could use it and maybe some of you could, too."- you were absolutely right, a bit of fluff really hit the spot on this dreary day.
I'm typically not too fond of song fics, but I really liked this one, and all that it implied.
Good job; thanks for sharing.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/07
Awesome, awesome job....I love this! I've read a lot of romance novels in my life and I gotta tell ya...this is as good as any of them are. Keep writing girl!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/07
I like It, you have a unique writing style. I think this the first story that you wrote that i read. I'll be reading more in the future. Really like the way you mixed a fic,a song and a shag into one chapter, keep doing it(no pun intened). |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/07
I liked this a lot. I think that you write very well. I have read all your other stories and have enjoyed them, especially Twisted Logic. |
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TerryUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/07
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/07
Fluff, but enjoyably well-written fluff. Thank you for a relaxing read. |
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DUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/07
I find it very erotic and very insightful. I wish in a way you could write my life out for me. That way i know i'm in good hands. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/07
Oooooooo!!
i love that song, an i never realised how tender it is until you put it into H/Hr perspective!!
i loved it! wondefully written!!
the LOVE that is able to radiate off of Harry and Hermione is GORGEOUS isnt it?
hehe!
Thanks!! |
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