I love horror stories and this one was fantastic!!! Sick and twisted and wonderful!! I hope you write more of them!

Loved it. Hope to read more in the future about Hermione and her Smiling Man.

It was sick and twisted and creepy as hell.

LOVED it!

Amazing story, really dark and touching at the same time. I wonder if you will continue to make more of the dark stories of Harry and Hermione, maybe hunting down dark wizards all over the world? like some twisted version of judges and ejecutors of the wizard world?

Love they way Harry is on the brink of sanity but keep it for Hermione sake and how she is on the brink of insanity but Harry keep her on this world.

I wonder if they will ever tell somebody how Harry escape and kill all the DE, specially Voldemort. Maybe a last interview with Rita? or a nice chat with Luna?

Any way really good story, Really hope some semblant of happiness they can get and know I need to read something light to cheer me up :} .

MAC

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You have a seriously sick mind. And god I love you for it. That was so twisted and creepy but also so good. God.. *shivers*

Disturbing, and yet gratifying at the same time. Strangely, it seems in the end that the score is settled, and the punishment fit the crime. Although it is a bit gruesome to read, afterward, I'm left with no horror, just even.

I hope that is what you were aiming for, or maybe I'm just sick. In "Screams", I was left with the urge to vomit. (I mean that in a good way). In comparison, this story had more character development and explanation of the inciting events, along with some powerful moral messages. Kind of a full circle feel to it.

Great job! I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep up the good work!

Wow. I'm not normally one for horror stories, but this one was gripping. Just like the predecessor "screams". Something just wouldn't let me stop reading until the end. I guess that means it's a great work.

I'd leave a longer review, but I should have left 5 minutes ago and have to run.

Well...I just finished screams and then this...I must say you write dark Harry and Hermione very well.

I've always had this feeling that the world JKR has created is filled with incongruencies such as why so many fear Voldemort when all he does i kill people. It isn't the fact he kills people, but how he does it that strikes terror into hearts.

Seeing that same kind of terror on the flip side of the coin caused by Harry and Hermione is strangely satisfying to me.

Thanks for writing,
Matt

Wouldn't it be fun if book seven was like this... Maybe not. This story is very powerful and brutal but it has a realsim about it. A truewar against a maniac like Voldemort would contain attrocities beyond just death. There are far worse things than just swift death and this story shows them in graphic detail. Its also about as dark as you can get. Thought provoking stuff.

This fucking freaked me out. I'm deciding if I hate this or love this. I guess I can't say. Let me just tell you that this is not a flamer but a confused one.