i love this! the psychology of every character is very very realistic. eventhough harry and hermione became a couple in a very twisted way i would still love it that they end up together.

I know that some--most, I guess--of the folks here at Portkey hate the way JKR ended the series. I didn't like it much, either, but mainly because I never really cottoned on to Ginny as a person. I think Rowling screwed up by making so minor a character of her and then giving her to Harry with so little development of her own. Ginny (and Molly) always seemed sort of spoiled to me, not in the cash and Valley Girl way, but in the way they were used to getting their way in relationships. So it's kind of fun in some of the fanfics to see them get their comeuppance.

I also like the way you are experimenting with grief and pain gone pathological. Chilling, great fun.

o0o00 draco must have been in some pain. yikes. =P good episode? haha i really these dark fics.

While I didn't like Neville being a traitor in the 1st piece, I have to admit that you did a fine bit of writing with both of these. Very good job! Well constructed & told. H & Hr's descent into madness is well done, reasonable, and scary as heck.

I'm so inlove with your stories, you need to write more of these. Is it bad that I feel this wonderfully sick pleasure reading it? I mean I can't stop smiling!

Am I a sick, sick man for thinking that these two stories are some of the most beautifully romantic things I've ever read?

Seriously, should I be seeking help?

Way too dark for me. I like 'screms' better, I don't think it was advisable to do a sequel for screams because as most dark fics its purpose is to shock the reader and you already did that with screams after that it seems that the dark things that happened to them and the things that they did afterward basically serve no purpose.

I don't read many darkfics as a rule. But this one, and the preceding one, are amazing. Anyone who thought that your repertoire extended only to farce and smut (admittedly, me) would have to be eating their words right now, along with their dignity. I'll have mine with hot English mustard...

Honestly, they're great. So refreshingly original for a start (as far as my experience with darkfics goes, anyway), and absolutely spine-chilling. I read them before I went to sleep, and I swear I heard Hermione's giggle when I put out the lamp.

And, I bow to you for making Neville guilty and scheming. I've never read him as anything but compliant and a loyal sidekick, and it was nice (well, not for him) to see a side of him that is neither of those.

As funny as it sounds, I would look forward to seeing this incarnation of Harry and Hermione again. Their story is tragic, yet utterly compelling. Thanks for making my sleep restless...

This was a great look at a darker version of how things can turn out. Thanks for sharing it!

Hey
wow wow you need to wright another one alonger one.

Hey
wow wow this is such a...cant think of a word to discribe story.
You should wright another one but longer with chapters.
Hope you do.

This was another good one. I like it a lot even though it is so much different than “Harry Potter and the Sword of Gryffindor.” I still like it a lot though. I wouldn't mind reading another one as well.I can't wait to read something else from you.

These are awesome! You need more of these! After all there must be a few death eaters left, or people that Hermione thinks betrayed them in some way. What about the future for the two?

that was awesome!!!!

i'm so glad that you made a sequel. i'm guessing that there isn't going to be more, but that's okay. i'm glad you finished it off. evil harry and hermione rule!!!!

though, i'm not sure that they're evil...more demented and mad. yeah, awesome.

sick and twisted.. and believ me I loved it!!!!Bloody brilliant it is. Please contiusewriting stufflike this