AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
Wow, I was a little sickened but it was still very good. Please update soon, maybe it'l help me feel better and hopefully get the idea of H/G out of my head. |
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Interesting start - you describe the feelings so well. You're really good, Can't wait for the nest chapter |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
Oh, my, that boy has it bad and I do feel sorry for him. He's realized that his real interests aren't on the one he's with, now, and he's too "staight-up" a guy to go after Hermione while still with Ginny. He'd best sieze some of that Gryffindor courage and tell both of them, in appropriate order, of course, just how he feels.
Good luck to him, it sounds like he's going to need it. |
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SummerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
yay! more chapters are coming!!!
i kinda feel bad for ginny, though. and harry. he must be so confused and miserable.
the cure: a snogging session with hermione! |
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Wow, I really liked the part after Harry and Ginny's...coupling (that's probably the best way to put it). It was so written like a man living in guilt. To repeat myself, I really enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Till then. |
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hello there
great start
this story has great potential
FYI: Dont expect reviews from me from June 5th to the 24th im abroad without computer access |
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Honesty...is such a lonely word. (Sorry. I know that was beyond cheesey, but I couldn't help myself.)
Poor Harry. But I would say lonely is preferable to stuck with Ginny-Sue any day. You have to post the H/Hr love soon, so I can wipe my brain clean of any revolting Harry and Ginny visuals. |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
Hurt and painful, wonderful descriptions and narrations as always. Only hope for a happy ending though. |
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Jeez,you're amazing. This was incredible to read. You've hit on exactly the issue that JK Rowling is not willing to address. She keeps insisting that it's Harry & Ginny, when Ginny is such a minor bit player in the stories. What's worse is that Ginny is SO not Harry's equal, while Hermione is. Hermione is the one that Harry would die to protect and the one to whom he would give his soul without a second thought. You've hit upon the tension of the underlying relationships and done an awesome job. I really love reading your writing and wish I was anywhere near as good as you are.
Please - this is a story that MUST get written
Regards,
the_scribbler
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