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Hermes
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/08/08
Hi!
Hey I'am a huge fan of your writting, I know I have never let any review , so I would understand if you choose to ignore me.
Well I only wanted to ask you if you're going to keep writing this story(It has already pased a year since you published it, so you can't blame for wonder), I really think is a very interesting idea, and if you lost the interes in it, there's nothing I can do.
So. . . I really, really hope you give a second chance to it.
O.k take care and even if you erase this story I want you to know that was a wonderful chapter, and I will kepp reading the other things you post, I will try to let you more reviews ( I don't do it because I never know what to say)
 

harrynmione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/07
Oh my God....Please, please, please continue this soon. My God! The angst is palpable. When Harry finally gets to be with Hermione its gonna be explosive. The writting in this piece is stupendous. I swear, I feel like I'm about to implode if he doesn't get to be with Hermione soon. Will be waiting anxiously for the next update!
 

quidditch kid
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/07
i didnt really like this chapter, but i no that of course you'll pull the story around! you're a great writer!
 

lnkmstr10
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/06/07
A truly awesome story so far! You are such a talented writer and I absolutely love your stories! I look forward anxiously for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
i completely agree with wierd4hanson with this one, he's said it..
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
oh man seriously more like a mental illness by reading this one. i gotta go read some faithful sensible harry fic right now!

thank god u 've got other fics too..
 

soccerkidadm
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
you are such a great writer! i love all of your stories!
 

Graciela
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
oohhh I love this story!!!!!!!!

I really do !!!!!!!!...

I love the way you write and the way you play with the characthers !!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!1

its killing me!!!!!!!!
 

ReviewerOfTheWest
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/07
Angst and self-inflicted romantic trauma with people breaking hearts and (at least implicit) promises. Not really my cup of tea. Fortunately it seems they are not married, but since your Harry doesn't seem to have the balls to break something off that doesn't make him happy (saving people?) this doesn't feel that it will end well, and that makes me sad.
 

atiqah
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/06/07
Amazing. I absolutely adore your writing. I can't wait to see what this fic will end up like.
 

katakali
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
Ohhh, the angst is back!!
Yummy.
Those guttural noises, those tortured closed in feelings, those tormented thoughts. I´m having a hell of a ride, please continue to take me along.
WONDERFUL!
Update yet?
 

weird4hanson
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
Well, this is off to a good start. But something with this premise has a very delicate balance.. too little and it feels false. Too much and it gets very old, very quickly. I think you're managed the balance, but it's already edging into the tedious realm.

How much time has elapsed since Harry realized his attraction to Hermione? A few days, weeks, months? The passage of time is not very clear -- which is probably why I was already feeling annoyed with Harry by the end. He doesn't want to hurt Ginny but he keeps sleeping with her and stringing her along? Doesn't he get that she will hurt all the harder the longer he puts this off?

Looking forward to seeing how you'll resolve this, but for the sake of the story, don't let Harry be a horse's ass for much longer. He doesn't have to get with Hermione right away, but at least let him have the basic decency to not be using a woman's body for his own selfish gratification when he doesn't care about her. I am in no way, shape or form a fan of Ginny (I'm hoping she dies in the next book and good riddance), but this behavior of Harry's is downright despicable.

Keep up the good work (and I'm always amazed when I scroll through the sheer volume of fanfic you've written!)
 

mimi
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
Wow poor harry!

man i hope he can be with hermione before he gets crazier!

update soon!

is really good!

 

harrynmione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
The angst is palpable. Its literally jumping off the screen. As sick as it sounds its incredibly fantastic! My day always brightens up whenerver you post a new fic, or update an existing one! You never seem to dissapoint. I LOVE your writting style. I will be sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter on this one...
 

InsaneTrollLogic
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
I've been reading this on fanfict00bs, but I did want to let you know just how good I think it is...and that would be very, very good. The next chapter is excellent as well. I'm a sucker for "Harry throws Ginny over for Hermione" fics, but only the ones where Harry doesn't come off as a royal berk. "Honesty" is a rarity in this regard.

Your standard of excellence is on the rise (with both this story and "Playing a Part"). I can't wait to read more from you.
 

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