AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/06/07
I thought that this was a great chapter and i'm sad to see that there is only one more left. But all great stories have to end sometime. I can't wait to see how it all ends.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I hope the last chapter doesn't disappoint.  |
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Pwp for the erotic_elves? Tell us more about it!
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It´s ok..no problem about the delay...I forgive you hehehe
This chapter was too short  but a great one |
Author Feedback: Well, it will most likely get posted here sometime next week instead of the final chapter. It has already gone through three incarnations despite the fact that it's just supposed to be some quick, plotless fun.  One of these days, I hope that I'll be satisfied with something I've written on the first try and won't have to rewrite so much.
For some reason, I thought this chapter was longer than it actually was. I didn't realize that I got rid of so much during the edits. I'm glad you liked it anyway, though. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/06/07
I don't really understand this story really well. i would use less descriptive words and just focus on Harry and Hermione. Good luck with the rest of the story. |
Author Feedback: I'm sorry you had some issues with it. I'm a very visual person, so I'm afraid I can't help putting in the details. Thank you very much for commenting! |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/06/07
SO Luna imagining Harry being pregnant! Beautiful humourous scenes, not the least of which is an ORANGE Ron.
YES, you are so very right - it's highly important to show that this is NOt another case of pants monster, if it was, he could just as well have stayed with Ginny, couldn't he? So take your time and bring it across convincingly! |
Author Feedback: LOL, I'm glad you didn't find the whole pregnancy convo too over the top. Orange Ron will be making another appearance in the next chapter. Poor boy.
And I'm glad you approved of the extra chapters. |
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SearcySigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/06/07
As always I am greatly enjoying this piece and though I am anxious to know the resolution of things I will be a bit sad to see it end.
Also I was wondering for how long were Hermione and Oliver a couple and why did Hermione end it?
Again a great chapter, patiently waiting for the last. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I hope that you'll find the ending I have planned for it satisfying.
Hermione and Oliver dated for two years. There was a whole subplot where Oliver reveals that he became jealous of the time she spent with her best friends and had even asked her to move in with him after he got traded to the Magpies, but it got written out during one of the rewrites. |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/06/07
Pity this chapter is too short. I always love reading a long, long chapter. Anyway I don't mind if you still maintain your way of writing, focusing on HIS POV.
Don't make your reader wait long for the next update, OK?
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Author Feedback: Sorry, I've never been good at writing long stories. Chapters 1-5 combined are only 26 pages on Word. I definitely intend to keep the story in his perspective, so no worries about that. And I'll most certainly try to finish the last chapter ASAP.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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well all I can say is that I do hope you will update when you can. I do truly like this story and would (as you guessed above) like to have some colsure lol. Great job on this chapter and thanks for updating |
Author Feedback: It's definitely my next priority after I finish writing that oneshot (because the last day that I could post the latter is this Saturday ). Thanks for reviewing! |
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I'm loving this story. He's just so miserable and it's just hilarious. You've gotta love it when guys don't get what they want. =) |
Author Feedback: LOL< I'm glad you're finding his misery amusing as well. |
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aw . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .
poor poor harry . .. . . .
harry and hermione forever and ever and ever and ever and ever ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
Author Feedback: Heh, I'm sure he'll find some relief soon enough; he's earned it.  |
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My oh my. That was a fun little chapter. Sad to say, but I'm thoroughly enjoying Harry's torment. I'm liking the direction of the story, so keep them coming.
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Author Feedback: Heh, glad to see a fellow sadist.  I hope the rest of the story will live up to your expectations. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/06/07
That was a really great chapter. I'm really glad that you updated. For some reason I thought I put this story on my chapter alerts, but whatever. Well, I really liked the chapter and thought..poor Harry. Lovely job. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. Harry is just too much fun to torture, don't you think? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/06/07
I am so glad you decided to keep writing. I am in love with this story! Please continue SOON!!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks.  The next chapter should be out sometime next week. |
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I'm liking this. I don't usually review for R17's but this is funny with the smut as an added extra. good work. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you kept reading despite it not being your usual type of story. Thanks for reviewing.  |
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Author Feedback: Heh, Harry is just too much fun to torment.
The next chapter should be out sometime next week. |
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Magnificent job- I really love how you develop your characters personality really well. This story has so much promise. I can't wait for you to update! Wonderful!!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. Characterization is very important to me, so I'm glad that you liked that part especially. |
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