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Hana-xoxo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/05/08
ok, do you LIKE putting us thruogh such a hellish heart ride. I mean seriously my heart is bruised and battered and...and filled with love. You convey the emotions so briliantly and so painfully. It's beautiful. As you read the story your heart clenches and bleeds and cries and tears leak from your eyes yet it's so darned beautiful.

What Harry gave to Hermione, which she could give to everyone elese (did that make any sense at all I don't think it did but hopefully you know what I mean) the concept of it is just soul-rederingly speechlessly beutiful. It touches your heart and your soul. Another beautiful and gorgeous story writtten by an amazing author. Your stories are written with such conviction and emotion you can't help but remain in awe of it. Amazzing job. It doesn't sum up my feelings in the littlest bits but no words can convey those emotions

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Hana
Author Feedback: I'm so glad you feel that way! And yes, to answer your first question, I do like putting the heart on a brutal rollercoaster ride- if people feel emotionally effected by something I've written, I know that it was actually worth writing and strong. Thank you, though, for reminding me through your 2 reviews that there are people in the world who appreciate that, and that criticism will come, but so will kindness. And yes, I know, most of my stories do make people upset- "why does it have to be so sad?" they usually ask.

My answer- well, because I'm a horrible comedy writer But I really want you to know how happy I am to hear that you enjoyed this and "Crying in the Sun", and how much it meant to me to read your reviews so long after I had originally posted this. Sometimes, it's things like this that make me want to start writing away again, and who knows- maybe something new will come out of it. Either way, I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me how my stories effected you and how highly you praised my writing- it was the greatest compliment you could have given. Thank you once again best wishes, padfoot_puppyeyes
 

oneiros lykos
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
Hmm, I'm going to have to read more stories. This was very well written, but it seems like you are of the opinion Harry is going to die at the end of the war, huh?
 

larawannabe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/06/07
Sigh. Bittersweet ending. Makes my eyes watered a bit. I like it!
 

Summer
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
oh, that's so sad. poor harry.

i like how you made him say these really deep, truthful, and simple things that made so much sense. you don't really "see" writers like that anymore. you must've put alot of thought into this. great job. hopefully you'll have more out there for everyone to read very soon!
 

mimi
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/07
Aw that was so sad!
i really liked it!
really good job!
 

harry n hermione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/07
That was so sad! I can't believe Harry died! I had to read that sentence twice to make sure I wasn't mistaken!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/07
Nice idea about making the speech, but I don't ever like a dead Harry. It might work better in a longer fic where there was more background on Harry's death. I would have enjoyed it more if he were alive, giving her advice. Him being dead is just too diatracting.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/07
I was really confused at the beginning....I was wondering why Harry came up to her...but...I understand now. What a wonderful story though. Very sad that Harry had to die...I dind'tl ike that part..but it made the fic very sweet.
 

sarahmay
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/07




Well, that was unexpected...had to go back and read that middle bit a few times because I couldn't believe that's what was actually written. Made me pretty sad actually
It was beautiful though and I applaud you for that! Excellent little story!
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/07
That was a short, but most affecting and poignant, piece of work. My compliments to you.
 

AmericanMione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
Wow, I wasn't expecting that. I thought for a second that I had misread the end of Hermione's memory. It was so bittersweet the way Harry just knew he would die. But he helped Hermione write that lovely speech. Great job.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
Well that was lovely, I was a bit shocked that Harry had passed but it was still a lovely story.
 

gingercat
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
This was just too sad. I never read anything where Harry dies. I am just too worried about the last book!!
 

wizardchick292
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
Awww Harry Potter died!! Why. I love Hermione's speech it was awesome and i'm sure that Hermione and Harry will be togehter in heaven soon. Keep Writing.
 

lorel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
Hey were is the tear jerker warning? No worries. Nice little one shot. I was suprised in the middle about Harry's death but you did plan it that way. Hoped it broke your writer's block.
 

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