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That was incredibly vague. Too vague. I'm not sure if you were going for that or not, but it left me confused.
I did like the talk about "the idea of you", so very true about real life. |
Author Feedback: I know it was vague, sorry about that. But I wrote it in one sitting and I wanted to get it over with. The moment they had was not meant to be specific. And the "idea of you" is very true about life.
Thanks for reading. |
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SummerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
that was too cute....so that means that you have to continue. i know you didn't specifically say what the "moment" was, so maybe you can do a flashback or something.
i bet it was hot.
more!  |
Author Feedback: Lol. Yes the moment was hot and I've been thinking about another chapter to add to this.I don't know yet. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
that was awesome, keep writing!! love the story, please let harry and hermione get together |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much, but I'm afraid this is it. In real life, things were left that way as well. Nothing has happened. But Harry and Hermione will be together, no doubt about that.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
I liked it. I would definently like to see more of this. You know, maybe another one-shot.  |
Author Feedback: Lol. I don't know. The way things are going in real life, it's just meant as a one shot. Nothing else has happened yet. Thanks for reading.  |
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hmmm interesting, this story is sequel of another or something??? if no then go on if yes, you should add it as a chapter in the other one, great job, harry is really a teen boy when he is talking, well done |
Author Feedback: lol. thanks. I really did want Harry to seem as a teenager, a hormonal one. No. This is a one-shot.  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
It was very cute. I liked how they were going to wiat. I can't wait for when they actually come togther..it'll just be all the better. Now..that "one time" did they actually have sex? And what're tehy're waiting for...to get togeher or to have sex..? |
Author Feedback: No. They just talked and kissed quiet a bit. They are waiting to be together, as a couple, not as lovers. Thanks for reading/ |
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