AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/08
I'm feeling a bit gay (in the happy way) so I thought I'd leave you a review. I thought it was highly entertaining and very creative which acts as a bit of medicine for a happy (not gay) soul.  |
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lampessaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/07
Ugh, this thing completely mangled those quotation marks. Why? Why? Was it because they were copy/pasted maybe? |
Author Feedback: Huh?
Right.
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lampessaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/07
That was a funny story and I'm glad you took the time to write it down. By the time I got to...“I'm feeling a bit gay,” Harry said huskily, nibbling on her ear.... I did actually Laugh Out Loud.
Cheers! |
Author Feedback: Haha for some reason people love that line. Haha, I <3 it too. And I'm glad you acutally lol-ed!!! That totally made my day. |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/07
lol Sooo funny!  Sexy as well.  Poor Ron, he had to witness Harry/Hermione playing tonsil-hockey.  I love it! Great work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/07
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Author Feedback:
*blink blink*
It was a joke... cool down, dude! |
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Another amusing fic. Slightly disturbing, but amusing nonetheless. Very well done. |
Author Feedback: Hehe, that was the whole point.
Oh, and I love your penname. Bananas are totally evil. So many A's and N's and they're so yellow, with the slippery-ness if you fall and - OUCH! does it hurt! Haha, I just love it. Sorry, anyway!
Thanks for the review! |
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Blue LadySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/06/07
Love how Ron jumps to conclusions...and ignores all the other signs. |
Author Feedback: Typical Ron, eh? Thanx for the review! |
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FonzieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/06/07
That was the most halarious fanfic I've ever read. LOL! Well Done! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
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buhahahha that was great... ron can be soooo dense loved it.. great little ficlet
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit |
Author Feedback: Oh I so totally wil ramble on!
But not right now, cause I'm freakishly tired.
But thanks for the review!
SwishAndFlick31 |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/07
that was fantastic, really brilliant =D
you got Ron's character perfectly there
great work, keep it up =]
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Author Feedback: Heehe, thanks! |
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Interesting story. However, I found quite a few spelling and grammar errors. There is vagueness and confusing sentence structure as well.
Keep it up, I see tons of potential. Interesting plot ideas. |
Author Feedback: I'm sorry about the grammar/spelling. I guess I didn't check through it properly.
But thanks for pointing it out.
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yesiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/06/07
I love how Harry kept saying "Sure" and silly Ron didn't notice anything! |
Author Feedback: Hehe, it's Ron, silly! |
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I've read this before. I've also read this before with the same mistakes in it. Ron using words he shouldn't, 'read' instead of 'red', etc.
Please make a note in the future if you have posted the story somewhere before. Fanfiction.net, 12 Mar 2007. |
Author Feedback: Oh. Whoops.
I really should check through my stories. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
HAHAHAHA!!!! freakin' hilarious!!! absolutely loved it....honestly, words cannot describe the hilarity of this! ron just seems like the type to assume something like that.. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the revieW!!!!!!
SwishAndFlick31 |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
that was great, keep writing on this story , i LOVE IT |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review!!
SwishAndFlick31 |
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