lmao Great story. I like the thought of Ron, Harry, and Draco actually getting along. Keep up the good work!

*screeeam* i love it!! eek!!! you don't know how i badly i laughed when she says her fantasy is to shag the DADA professer on his desk!!! hahah!!! but i hated it when it ended!!! i liked it but i kinda when i read the ending.... lol!!! ily!!! bye!!!

that was a good story. lol. i'm talking liked that cuz i'm a tad upset. well anyway. like ALWAYS!!! good job!!! can you make a story i can critizice? lol

Another very amusing chapter. I liked how your brought the rest of the characters into the story. It does feel kind of forced though with the whole hag wanting Harry to be fired. I was happy to see that Ron is now married to Luna and Ginny married to Draco. Loved the whole Rita Jr. tabloid writer thing. I wish one of Ginny's hexes would have gotten her though. This was a very good way to end the story with eveyrone pregnant.

Just going back and reading some of your older stories. This one was hilarious!!! Hermione here is so different then your Hermione in Changes.

She walked over to the blackboard and read the line out loud. “I must not lust after another wizard's wife.”

And then he comes back with 'Your robes are too tight'. I could not help but read the rest of the chapter with a smile on my face. Too funny.. Then to sum it all up, they are going to have a child together. Can we send this in to JKR and say, 'This is what the epilogue should have been!!!!'

Aww, that was so cute and sexy! Keep up the great work. I really like your stories!

Well, I did as I said I would and read this story to verify the rating for you. It is indeed a PG13 and you have no worries. I think it is rather tame with only hints of interesting things. There should be no complaints for making the rating higher. I hope this helps.

Oh and it was cute too. I enjoyed it.

PJ

ha ha ha that's great! I can't wait to read the chapter about the ugliest witch at Hogwarts?

*%* Susanna *%*

Er, I would up the rating or explain why it is PG 13 as it is rather risque.

that was an incredible story... i would like to see it go all the way to the birth...please make another.

Well, you got the remark in. I was a bit put off by the spelling of some simple words. Probably they did not get noted because they are real or near homonyms for what you meant. It is too bad that the fancy tools don't always help and it's almost impossible to catch all one's own errors. A good beta could be a great help.
Keep writing. Don't let my pedantry discourage you; I mean well and I want to read more as you grow.
More, please... Old Chuck

Okay, do I have to be registered to do that? If so, I probably won't be able to do that...
But I'm glad u like the idea of a h/hr DH!

I loved this as well as the last one. The first chapter was the best though.

Very cute ^.^
I adored this. Usually I don't like reading HHr together, but this was great!

I'm glad you are curious. Well, here's my plan. You are the first one to find out about it.

We all want harry and Hermione to get together in the seventh book, right? Let's face it, JKR is not going to allow this in her book. Not to disrespect her authority, but I find that this is a huge mistake. There is no way Harry Potter can live on without Harmony.

Since this month is the release of movie five, it is as they said in the commercials "The rebellion against the ministry". Well, that's not the only rebellion going on. There's also the "Harmony Rebellion". It is time for us to protect and protest our ship!

What We Are going to do:
1. We will be co-authoring our version of Deathly Hallows with a bunch of h/hr obsessed fanfic writers. This group will be known as the "Harmony Rebellion".
2. We will need a place to talk about our fanfic, and discuss and agree with our fellow co-authors, what will be written. We will also need a place to post our fanfic. My plan is to create our own web-site. I'm not sure how to do this or even if it is possible. Maybe someone could make like a blog where we can all meet on and write?
3. Once we have created our story, we're gonna post it on all the HP fanfic sites we can. Then, in an author's note, we will tell everyone to go to our "website".
4. On our website, we will have them sign a pitition, saying that our fanfiction was better than the real book seven.
5. When we get enough people, we'll mail it to, well, maybe the movie makers of the HP films? Or a news crew? Anything to let people know about our protest.

I know what you're thinking. It's impossible. I disagree. I truly believe that we can do this. Our fanfiction has to be so good that we will be able to convince non harmony shippers that this is better than the real DH. And if it doesn't work, at least we'll have fun writing the fanfic.

So what do you think? Want to join? Would others want to? Please let me know what you think ASAP.