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I love these sorts of stories, a relationship from another set of eyes. Even better when it isn't somebody we would immediately think of, the Weasleys for example. I think you captured the series through Hermione's mother's eyes wonderfully!
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JayUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/09/07
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/07/07
Ohhhh, that's really cute. I like it a lot. I especially liked the '55' part. Keep it up!
~luvsharrypotter (on FictionAlley) |
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Aww, that was so so sweet. I absolutely loved it. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. |
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Aww, that was cute, it was a sweet little fic told from the sidelines, and well written! Keep up the good work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/07
sweet story, I can just see Harry learning about the '55' and wearing that number on his jersey while playing quidditch professionally, while Hermione and the kids have the same number on their team shirts.. kind of like wearing Tony Stewart's #20... |
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Oh, I absolutely loved this! I don't know why I got a kind of knot in my throat when I finished reading.
I think that you've made a wonderful job of giving a credible and lovely personality to two people that we've never read about in the books, and that is very hard to archieve when it comes to HP, so bravo.
I loved the last paragraph. Straight to my favorites! |
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sosososososos cute i really liked the55 that was so cute a bit boring in the middle but good |
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MikeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/07
This was very sweet and a little heart wrenching. It did seem to be very realistic from a parent's point of view. Great job! |
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I really liked your portrayal of Hermione's parents. Their caring attitude towards Hermione and their trust in her shows a possible justification on why they always blend in the background in the books. The fic gives a take on what's going on in their heads after every dangerous adventure Hermione's been through when I still wonder how they could allow their daughter to pursue life full of danger in a world unknown to them. Good job! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/07
Extremely well written and beautifully executed. Mr and Mrs Granger were beautiful and well done. Encore |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/07
That was really interesting to read. I've never read it from a parent's POV. I thought that it was good. Nice job. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review.
Cheers Lady L |
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This was beautiful, reading about all of their adventures from someone like Hermione's mom was a new experience and I loved it! It was so different and cool! 55...hahah that was very funny!!! Great one-shot fic!!! Until later!!!
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Author Feedback:  I'm so glad you liked it! I just really wanted to show how it would all be seen from a mothers perspective and I'm so glad that it seems to have worked! Also 55 was my favourite too!
Cheers Lady L |
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This was a wonderfully written piece, and one I enjoyed very much. I plan on adding it to my favorites file first thing after I post this review.
Your description of Harry and Hermione's friendship/relationship through Hermione's mother's eyes was exactly how I would picture a parent on the outside looking in viewing it. And the fact that you did not delve into any out-of-character Weasley bashing by only pointing out the canon facts of Ron being a total prat lent to my enjoyment of this fic. There is quite enough in canon not to have to make anything up.
This was the first of your writing that I have read, and if this is a hint at the quality of your work, you have gained a new fan and follower.
Keep up the great work.
PA
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Author Feedback: When I got your review on my e-mail I created a new file in my e-mail account for reviews like yours (assuming I will ever get more) that are really thoughtfull and that remind me why it's so rewarding to share my writing with others.
You seem to have appreciated all of the points that I particularly wanted to illustrate and that is so satisfying to me. Thankyou so much for the thought that you have put into your review, it really does mean a lot to me.
Kind Regards
Ruth Potter |
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Glad to see that you are back! I love all of your stories. This was no exception. It was so differently written and very enjoyable. It was so sweet at the end |
Author Feedback:  That's so sweet of you to say! I'm so glad you liked this story and my others and thankyou for taking the time to review.
Cheers Lady L |
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