Great story and I could find nothing to criticize. Looking forward to the rest of the story, hope it comes soon.

i can't wait to find out whats going to happen with harry and hermione after the ritual. Oooh cliffie! Can't wait for next update

Thanks for the update, a little dark perhaps but I like your solution - it's clear that this chapter was an easy one for you to write, with nice flow and balance. So Voldemort can tell when Horcruxes are destroyed? Or only when the last one's gone? Or was this one special b/c it was in Harry and he lost his connection to HJP? Sorry for the questions, but it's a complement, honest. Looking forward to the next update!

Love the story!!! Love it every time I read it. Fantastic job! It's one of my favorites by far!!

amazing can not wait for the next chapter. i am waiting with bated breath!!

Interesting place to leave this. Is Pettigrew writhing in pain or is he staring at his Master? Is Hermione going to recover? What about Harry?

Excellent technical description of the effects of the ceremony/incantation to remove the soul fragment from Harry's scar.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes from here.

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Did hermione's mother remarry between this chapter and the last ?

Aside from the aaron/david confusion, a very addictive story so far.

Thanks for the update. I can understand how hard it can be to go back to a story that you have lost your inspiration for and pick it back up.

pleae please please please update soon this is a great story and i cant wait for more

This was good like really good! And I cant wait to read more so please update soon!

Hey there,

I was actually just listening to the song How to Save a Life on the way home from volleyball this morning and I thought of this fic and when I got home I was thrilled to see you updated it! I love this story! Keep up the good work!

well i like how it is au, and about the mistakes you've made; it is easily done by any author especially if you haven't written for a while. I really like this story, and i think its good that Harry's in touch with his emotion, it shows a new side of him that J.K never showed. I love this story so i hope you dont say to hell with it

This was amazing! I absolutely loved it! And I cant wait to read more so please update again soon!

Hey great stuff, keep updating soon please, i like the way the H/Hr relationship is going at a nice pace, not to quick or slow

Another brilliant chapter. Reading the section where Harry meets Hermione's extended family, brought back some memories. Can't wait for the next chapter.