It was good and exciting, im reaally liking this story so far so good job!! however i gotta few bones to pick: lol 1 i don't like tht Dawson dude he seems really commanding and controlling haha idk if it's just me 2 i don't think harry could use the killing curse he's too good SPOILER ALERT thts y he didn't use it in DH 3 nothing can stop the killing curse just and fyi lol aaand last 4 commmee onn i want some action between harry and hermione!! haha so far's they just friends i need mooore lol but im lovin it so keep it up!!

Pretty good story, Good chapter, I like it - Keep \'em coming !

Bri

Wow, I\'m loving this story. Can\'t wait for an update. Harry and Hermione are just so cute together.

This was amazing! I really enjoyed this chapter a lot of things happened in it! I cant wait to read more! Please update again soon!

Great story and I could find nothing to criticize. Looking forward to the rest of the story, hope it comes soon.

What a great story I read it over the past day and i must say it is excellent!! I cannot wait for the rest of your story!!

I'm said to see this story coming to an end, I've enjoyed reading it. If all the remaining chapters are as well written as this chapter and previous chapters then I know they will be a joy to read.

Another well written chapter. The ritual of getting the piece of soul out of harry, is well thought out and well written

Loved this chapter, as per usual it is well written and a joy to read

Nicely done. The pace and tone of this chapter were well set. I'm looking forward to seeing how things will develop and for the pace to quicken.

This update was amazing! I loved every single part of it and now I get to read another chapter!

Another great chapter, not much action of course but i have a feeling there is loads of that to come. I like that the DA is a bit more realistic in this, i.e. the younger students are accepting they can't go out and fight. This story is one of my favourites so keep it up, can't wait for next chapter!

Aug. 22, 2009

Harry's nothing, if not a leader. You've done a nice job here of showing that. I liked the way the others rally around him and support him - especially Hermione.

Now - one bone to pick (sort of). Most writers agree that Tom Riddle would avoid the wholesale slaughter of Muggles for fear that the magical realm would be revealed. He's not stupid. He knows, or has minions who know, that the Muggle world far outweighs and out-classes the magical one and that if the Muggles got their backs against the wall, they'd find a way to find back and they would crush the magical realm...even if it took fifty or a hundred years to do.

Killing Muggles by the hundreds just doesn't sit well, when you look at it from the perspective of all those Muggle-born's who he'd rather be killing first.

Anyway - just my $0.02 worth. You've written a nice chapter here, no matter what.

regards,

the_scribbler

Great job. I'm glad they woke up and are ready to kick some butt! Haha. Love the story and I can't wait to read more of it!

Loved this chapter. Really liked the interaction between the trio. It's well written.