|
Just a note, Pancakes for breakfast is an American thing. I have never in my life met anyone in Britian that would have pancakes for breakfast. |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 05/11/07
I was all for the next chapter, and what do I see when I page up, and see no next?? Devestated. Hopefully the next chapter will come out soon. Wonder how Harry will react to seeing Sirius again?? This is going to be good. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!! |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/10/07
Can't wait for the rest! Good story, I really like it when authors put a different twist on storylines. |
| |
|
keep writing this fic is so sweet!!!!i hae nevr read fan fic and when i read this one i wantd to read more ecpecially urs!!so keep on writing |
| |
stevenUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/07
its a great story by far one of the best i have had the pleasure of reading includeing J.K Rowling's work please continue soon i am looking foward to seeing what happens next |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/05/07
What do you call that a novelty act.
I don't know but it was-ent to bad.
Well that was a novelty.
Keep it up please.
it's a good story so far.
 this real cool.
 Harry and Hermione are the best.
well I will see all next time on the Portkey.Org
show but be for I go it's time for a cartoon ending form Portkey Pig so here it go's.
Tha tha tha that's all floks! But form Harry Potter " That's all muggle's" and Form Me " That's a Rap" |
| |
RosaliSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/05/07
I'm taking this story home with me; the summary seemed interesting. I'll let you know how it went.
Cheers!
Rosali |
Author Feedback: Thanks |
| |
LizzUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/05/07
Ohh!! I just love this story!! It's so fantastic! I've read some "what-the-world-would-be-like-with-out-Voldemort-fics" but I think this might just be the best! I really like the idea about it being the birthday wish that got them there, and I especially love the fact that Ron and Hermione are in it. A lot of the ones I read made Harry apparently a jerk in the alternate world and not friends with the two of them.....so big thumbs up for this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks!! |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/05/07
Oh man, love the concept and really want to see where you are going with this. Keep em coming please!!! |
| |
telmieSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/05/07
i really like your plot, really. You can write some drama, romance, humor, whatever you takes, because the story is very open at this point.
But I have a confession to you. I´m scared.
You didn´t finish your last two stories, two good stories, and I fear the destiny of this one.
and I ask you: can you finish this one? You have a great plot in your hands. think about.
congratulations for this two chapters.
sincerely,
telma. |
Author Feedback: I do plan of finishing them, no worries. Thanks. |
| |
wow Love it! Please update soon, I love that the Hermione and Ron from his 'reality' are there too! That makes it much better!!! Its awesome, hope to see a new one very soon!! Until then! |
| |
Aw, Lily, James, and two sisters! Yaaay to Harry having a nice family. Oooh, I can't wait to read what happens when they visit Sirius! |
| |
|
Nice start! Aw, Poor Harry. I don't blame him for not being in a party mood. Woo Hoo to cake with fire whiskey in it! Ah, So Dumbledore made Harry's birthday wish come true. Excellent! |
| |
SummerUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/05/07
my gosh. i wanted to cry!  harry's parent's alive!!! and now sirius!!!!
...i'm still crying here! i'm so happy! |
| |
|
This is an interesting concept for a story - I love it! Can't wait until you update again! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
| |
|