Wow. Dark. That was (shivers). I can't believe Neville would do that. I bet Harry gave him a good torchering. (shivers) Update Harry Potter and the Sword of Gryffindor soon.

It was really dark. I never thought about Harry or Hermione in that way, it never seemed right.
I think it was an interesting oneshot, and it was well written. You have made it clear that you are a wonderful writer, whatever topic you try to explore.
Keep going with this awesome work,
sakura_txell

Wow, that was pretty intense! I normally don't like dark fics but this one was fantastic, and I totally support trying to get out of your comfort zone. Excellent work!

Wow! this was rough, I could have never imagined this kind of situation, I find it refreshing and a really well done experiment. I have already read Harry Potter and the Sword of Gryffindor and I found it completely hilarious, and it's really risky of you to write something so far from your previous genre.

Congratulations on this great fic. You spooked the breath out of me.

°!"danni"!°

Most sacred excrement!!! That's an exceedingly dark and poignant story. Interesting choice of betrayer, too, as Neville is one of the last you'd expect that of, but we all have our dark side and Tom found his.

My compliments on an excellent and chilling piece.

This is one scary fic! You surprised me with the ending I never considered Neville capable of betrayal. Anyway you definitely proved that you can write dark fic. This is one of the few dark fics taht i like

Scary, but very brilliant story!
I'm usually not very fond of horror/angst.
But this incredible!

woah... that was interesting. o_o loved it. >=D

I could just imagine Hermione on the floor... sitting, lying, smiling her evil little smile. Dark

CWFM

Glps... Either way, you never do things half ways...
I really shivered when I read this... I used to laugh so much when I was reading your other fic... This is really something different... And I can't say I like a demented Hermione... ;-)

Rufus

Lovely. Powerful. Hermione's half-insane manner of speech gives the piece the atmosphere it needs to pull this off well. Perhaps I read too quickly - the first time I pretty much skimmed over the details at the beginning of the story, especially where Neville trembles whenever he writes a post. Not that that would really have clued me in as to why Neville was the one approached - silly me. But it works, and it's well written.

Are H & H still human? They sound like vampires. And Neville - well, it's a possibility that he'll turn traitor. Not as likely as Ron or Ginny turning traitor, mind, but...

Dark indeed.

I liked it, but think I would have liked it more if you had chosen a character other than Neville. Even for Bellatrix, I don't think he would give up his friends.

You had quite a few grammatical errors.

That was incredible. I love "Sword of Gryffindor", but this was on a whole other level! I hope you write more of this kind of thing, but please finish Sword first.

Serpent clone... Jeez... That's fucking.. EVIL. I mean.. wow.. Neville turned them over for Bella? TThen they came after him? Christ... wow... That's.. that's horrible... Well written though........ Wow... You can do someting other than the comedy... although i like the comedy better... *shudder* Nice job...

I have a chill in my spine and its going to stay there for a long while, just like this story.