wow. you really did write a dark fic. i used to see summaries about dark fics but got really disappointed after reading the corresponding stories. i'm addicteed to one-shots and this is a really really good one.

Absolutely rivetting. I have read a few mentions of Harry becomming evil only as a cause to be prevented. This fic is entcing. It is absolutely well written.

I guess I started at the wrong end, because I read Voldemutt's resurrection first and loved it. But I really like this twisted little puppy of a world you've come up with. It is true that evil always seeks to pervert right and imitate it in a dark and vicious manner. You've taken the loyalty of the hero and twisted it into something fearsome. Scary. Love it.

Wow talk about dark and a bit scary! But wicked and though unexpected but I loved it!

I think it is quite interesting; this dark universe you are creating. I can also see tehy provide a link to report the story... some are a bit uptight and sensitive. I'll like to read the rest of the ficlets of this universe.

Take care,

Rosali

Um, I am extremely confused. So this was an H/HR fic? Good job? I think?

Bah. I would've liked it more if Neville hadn't been the betrayer, since he is one of my favorite characters and he seems to be an unlikely candidate for betraying H/Hr, but still, good job, very creepy.

oh man that was awesome! I love dark h/hr but I have such a hard time finding good ones, so I'm glad I found this one. Great job!

o0o i like dark!harry/ hermione stories. =) they make me feel all warm and happy inside. hahah. nice story.

great feeling to it, the wickedness of hermoine was dead on, the way u described her behaviour, kudos, i was totally watching it, im going to read the sequel now

this is quite good. with its companion piece, i think you have a godd sense of the heart of darkness. bellatrix gone, draco gone, neville (the rotter) gone. other miscreants still abound. what about malfoy sr and his wife? too bad dumbles is gone, he could really use the new harry/hermione treatment. regardless, this is compelling stuff. would like to see more.

Very well written. Hermione expressed herself very wickedly well, and one could understand why she is the way she is. I just can't get over how well the mood was expressed throughout the story. Excellent job!

u really scared me on that one that was pretty intense

it also bordered the lines of nauseating especially the part about harry having his tounge cut out and then her kissing him

if thats what you wanted bravo you did excellent but if not you still did pretty good

ive never read a fic like this so i give an A+ on originality

I like it. Not overdone, just the right amount of suspence. Hermione's suitably creepy. Nicely done.

I kind of like dark stories. I have an evil side inside of me and I find this story is so much appealing. Really love it. You should write some more stories like this.

Too bad it's just one shot. I'd love to read it if it's longer, novel length maybe? But I know I cann't have everything, right?

Good job. As long as you don't neglect 'the sword'. I am still waiting for its update, soon.