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Just a Twinkle

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 09/06/07

This story is great, I hope that you post more soon.

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/05/07

I hope that you do decide to revise or continue "One More Chance." I read a couple chapters and thought that it was pretty good but decided to stop since it hasn't been updated in a while. I am also liking this story with Lilly and James as well. I can't wait for the next update!

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/05/07

I kept thinking she was going eto go into labor this chapter, it must happen next chapter. I can't wait for the next update.

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 23/05/07

Yeah very cute so far, I like to see what hapens when the baby has been born

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/05/07

Yeah

great storie so far they are becoming one happy familly I hope voldemort doesn`t show up this time.

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/05/07

It's sad to see how Lily's family can't really stand her but it is nice to know that she has a good support system with James and his family. I can't wait for the next update.

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/05/07

I like this story a lot. I found it to be very interestingwhen they were at Lily's house. I liked to see how much of a problem her wholw family thought that magic was. My question is... has Volemort started raising havic yet? I can't wait for the next update to see what will happen next. Oh, do you plan on finishing your "One More Chance story"?

Author Feedback: Wait a wee bit. There is more to come about the Voldemort thing. I have finished the whole story, so I'll update two more chapters tomorrow. "One More Chance" may end up getting the rehab treatment like this one because there were alot of mistakes I made along the way. I'm not sure if I'm gonna do it, but there's a possibility. I like this one better this way, so more than likely I'll be taking a look at the other one too.

Thanks for reviewing and more importantly for not abandoning it because of the short first chapter!!! I know it's short, but every way I added on to it sounded lame!

Thanks again!

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