AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 18/07/08
Love the chapters, looking forward to the next one, hope it's soon! |
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u rok i love this story a lot it rocks a lot and i really like its plot too |
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MeliUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 15/01/08
Wow love your fic. Very good chapters. Hope there more chapters soon. |
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CandraSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/11/07
That was really sweet.  I loved Hermione comforting Harry after his nightmare. I'm glad they are going to go back to school and finish their education.
Harry's surprise for Hermione was great.  I just wonder how he managed to paint and refurnish her room in only a few ours without magic. |
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CandraSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/11/07
I love the way you portray the connection between Harry and Hermione. The Big Ben scene was my favourite. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 03/11/07
I really like this fic! Keep going. I can't wait to read the next installment. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/09/07
I love this story. You have written some great chapters. I can\'t wait for the next update! |
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Nimbus02Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 26/09/07
Duh Duh Duh!!! Vhere is Ginny? No vone knows...ah ah ah...hee hee...awesome chapter...can't wait for the next chapter...like always |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/09/07
Well, that was an interesting wedding. I do think Harry & Hermione blend well together and I'm glad -this- MRs. Weaseley isn't trying for the "one big happy family" thing with them. The wedding ceremony was well thought out and enjoyable, I could just see those two using those vows. The battle was well-written and I have to admit that I wonder just what the goal was, though I've a very strong suspicion that someone with red hair is going to be offered a position with Tom. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/09/07
Heh, that's a very nice chapter showing their relationship evolving naturally, but powerfully, in completely innocent ways. There's no shagging nor intense snogging, but there's a growing bond between them that's all the more powerful because it's not primarily sex-linked. I like the way you're taking this and I particularly liked your use of Toby Keith's song in that last section; it's a favorite of mine and I've used it in a similar way in a story of my own. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/09/07
A most interesting birthday party he has, with all manner of presents. IMHO, Ginny's "present" was a bit over the top and indicative more of insecurity than of a real love. Hermione's present, OTOH, clearly shows the deep affection and love she has for Harry, and which he reciprocates. Lots of potential, there, for that relationship to grow even deeper, stronger, and more intimate. I suspect Ginny is becoming quite afraid of just that fact, as is Ron. Tough, people are not possessions, they have free will. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/09/07
An excellent chapter as Harry and Hermione develop their bond a bit more. I thought the whole chapter flowed quite nicely and the flight over London and then the scene by Big Ben were very nice touches, well executed. I have to say, though, that the last conversation of the chapter was the perfect cap to it.
Bravo! |
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I like this story so far. Hating Ginny, but that's normal lol. Anyways, update soon, I look forward to it! |
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Wonderful chapter! I especially loved the sweet moments where Harry and Hermione were admiring each others dress and the moments the group shared as friends as well as when Harry went to retrieve Hermione and Gabrielle after the fight. Ginny's little snit about getting back at Hermione for taking Harry though; she'll get hers. I'm glad that Molly took it better though.
The fight scene was very nicely done and I'm glad Grayback's out of the picture. Now to get rid of the others.
I like that there's a secret informant for Voldemort. Always intriguing to have one of those. And I'm interested in finding out what the DE's are looking for that was no longer at the Burrow so conveniently after Hermione left with Gabrielle. 
Kudos to you this was another lovely piece to read. Keep them coming! I'm excited about what's to come.  and  |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I, for one, LOOOOVE little fluffy moments (which I'm sure nobody has noticed  ) like the one at the beginning. As for action scenes, they could definitely be better (I'm much better at writing sappy fluffy things than violence). I'm glad you enjoyed them though! I was just glad that I was able to have Remus kill Greyback. It was only fair, after all. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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i absolutley love your story. i wonder who betrayed them. please update soon! |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much! I've been pleasantly surprised by just how much people like this story. This was the first fic I ever wrote (although obviously not the first one finished...). I had no idea it would be so well-liked. I'm very glad that you like it though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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