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i loved this story so far i loved that she learned occulemncy (yeah i know i cant spell) and that she wasnt just telling him about it that he had to witness it!!!!! great |
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Nina_BeansUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/07/08
I loved urr story, beautifully written! I nearly cried at the end of it. Its truly beautiful! |
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hermioneUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/08
 waaaaahhhh....am so gonna wail now!!!brilliant fic...well writeen in flashback...guess tht was jkr's trademark too...oh how i wish it were nt soooo sad...now am gonna feel sad...but good plot...good. |
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this was an amazing story, although it was very very depressing!! hermione is truely an amazing character in this story, with many different layers from greiving mother, to sorrowful woman, to revenge-seeking wife. lovely job! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/08
Well, the fact that Malfoy killed himself doesn't give Hermione back James, Harry and the unborn child, and doesn't avenge the ten years in Azkaban. So, what can I say...life is unfair, that's for true...but at last in fanfic, one could hope to find some justice. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/08
Well that was pretty brutal. I can see where Hermione would go crazy. That is so horrible that they died. I cannot beleive that her baby died also. I really enjoyed it. I can't think of any constructive criticism. I really enjoyed it. I hope that you keep writing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/10/07
Oooh, this is going to be a good story...I can tell. So, did Hermione die?? Was Malfoy a lousey shot?? Keep up the good work, and hopefully the next chapter comes out soon. God Bless!! |
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Oh my goodness poor Hermione to have the guilt and to lose her unborn daughter after losing Harry and James to that monster of a wessel. And to have to be put in there of all places. very ansty really enjoyed it though |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/06/07
nice ending... but which one died??? did malfoy shoot himself or hermione??? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/06/07
Wow! All I have to say is wow! I mean that made me cry! Wow... Bravo! |
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pepmontSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/07
Hi there, nice story, you got the emotions pretty clear, it was touching... and in the end... did draco shoot hermione or himself? |
Author Feedback: thanx fr the review, and the end is left ambiguous although i like 2 believe that draco shot himself. |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/05/07
I thought Hermione would also have killed herself - surely Draco wouldn't have had the decency to off himself! |
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wow. this hit deep. it was very well written, thank you for sharing. |
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i think its a great story personally...
really sad...
great ending! especeially wen draco shoots hermione ;]
write more pls... |
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