That was a sweet story and it's amazing how quickly you forget the pain when that little bundle is placed in your arms....though I agree with Hermione what "WE" cause I'm sure it was "ME" doing all the hard work....lol

Aww that was so sweet! In reality, in my country, Mother's Day was on the May 6th, the first Sunday of the month, but oh well...

i really liked that... quite enjoyed it. are you going to be writing anymore H/Hr fics???
keep writing!

Great, great fic! So cute. I love the way you portrayed Hermione here and I love the words you used...

BTW, "Suddenly all the pain did not matter all that mattered was looking down at the beautiful little boy in her arms." Its a girl isn't it? Just thought you should know...

Great job again!

That was a good story, but I'm wondering about that baby...How did she change genders twice in three sentences? There were also a few little grammatical errors, but that's nothing a good beta couldn't fix.

Thanks for posting and keep up the great work!

That was a great one-shot! I liked that you put it in Hermione's perspective, it was very funny . Great job!

That was really great. I really liked it. Very beautiful. You captured thel ove that Harry would have. Il ike the name, Rae is very pretty...

love the story... you just had some errors like the part where they called rae a beautiful little boy and the part where harry says "and your wonderful mrs. potter" instead of you're, you wrote your...

don't worry! they are just honest mistakes

smile_monalisa

This could be a great story if it was cleaned up a little bit. At one point while reading it I thought that Harry was having the baby, and Hermione was helping him through the labor. When she finally delivers Harry hands her a little boy? I thought she had a girl?

The bones are there for a great little fic, it just needs a little tweaking

That was cute. I can't wait to read more of your stories though. They'll be good I'm sure.

*%* Susanna *%*

I was about to mention that one mistake you had about the girl being a boy and than read the reviews you already had and realized you had already been told and were probably regretting that error. Anyway it was a great story even though Harry sounds too mean in this story but the descriptions were vivid,great and real. great job

I liked it a lot. Although towards the end, you call the baby a boy instead of a girl. It is during the part where Hermione is thinking about how all the pain is worth it. Other than that, I really liked it...I thought it was cute.

It was good! There was only one mistake...
When it said, "Suddenly all the pain did not matter all that mattered was looking down at the beautiful little boy in her arms." It should've been beatiful little girl right?