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Ash
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/08
Ooops I meant Lily not james lol how embarassing my bad, how dumb of me when he called his daughter lily and I said james
 

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Ash
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/08
Short and sweet, maybe just a tad too short, but who cares i liked the end bit with james added a nice touch to the story.
 

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usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/07
Very intersting. I liked it..very different. I haven't read anything like it. Great job.
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sakura_txell
 

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AnndeeGranger
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/07
I think you did well on the P.O.V, but I was a bit confused at the switch from third to first intially.

Did you translate it yourself? I noticed a lot of grammar errors. Pronouns were dropped, as well as verbs.

You may want to look for a beta to fix little things like that.
Author Feedback: I have some problems with translation, and I am sorry, but I am already looking for a beta. I didn't know there were so many mistakes!
Thanks for your review,
sakura_txell
 

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Julie3291
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/07
That was a very cute little one shot. I love the fact that you added Lilly in there. Keep up the good work.
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sakura_txell
 

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davek
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/07
short but sweet. I like it. and a happy ending is never a bad thing.

ciao
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sakura_txell
 

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the_pink_eraser
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/07
Nice story!
Liked the different style and everything.
A bit short, thou. The good thing about the way you wrote is that you could explore more of the details and what the character is feeling in each moment, building up a huge climax in the story.
Next time, maybe?
Just don't stop writing!

kudos!!!
Author Feedback: I still have many problems with my English. In fact, for the past year, I have tried to begin a chaptered story, but I need more time to get the courage and write it. The story is already planned, but not written.
I think I am exploring only a feeling in each short story, for now.
Thanks for your review,
sakura_txell
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/07
It's a beautiful and sweet story! Keep up the amazing work!
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sakura_txell
 

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