AWWWW! This is adorable! A very well-written H/HR chemistry is always a plus, and you have definitely managed to think one up. I especially love the last part, about the bets for the engagement. It's very cute. If I had to give this a rating out of ten, I'd probably say... fifty!

Wonderful work, keep it up!

Is this finished? In some ways it feels like it is...but there's more that could be said, I think..and so I'm left wanting more, because I really, really like it.

Let us know?


Regards,

the_scribbler

lol! Keep up the good work qnd up date as soon as humanly possible! - Charmedlily

I loved the twins inventions, so cool, and I liked when Hermione almost said “my Harry.” Verity is a little repetitive when she’s giving Hermione information, though; it threw me off just slightly. The theory behind how she manipulated is intriguing. He he… a wall otherwise know as Hagrid – I like that line and other small witty ones like it throughout this piece. The first part is very heavy with dialogue, and I thought it was odd that Ron wasn’t surprised at all or angry with Ginny – just seems like the sort of thing he’d react to more than everyone else. Other than that I enjoyed it.

Hermione punched Ginny! Yay! Remus and Tonks and Ron and Luna are so cute, lol. Their little scheme makes me very happy. I adore the awkwardness between Harry and Hermione, it’s so much more realistic and I love you for making it so.

Please update soon!!! I want to find out what happens next!!!

Sorry, but this is the only way I can add you to my favorite authors.

It's definitely easy to see the influential writers that helped to mold your story, but it had a twist of your own that was truly individule.

Congratulations on your new Authorship! Now the legend of 'Lady Starlight' goes beyond the realm of Beta reading!

Robertk

Lady Starlight, this is a good two-shot... I wish J.K. would start DH that way too... It would, but it wouldn't surprise me if she did... It's funny that they all set them up... I can't believe Ginny though.. Argh... You should have just like Hermione kick Ginny's ass to the end of DH... lol... Hope to see more of your work soon!

Yay! I love a happy ending! The story was great, especially the fluff. I do think that the whole Ginny thing was a little under-developed, but all in all a pretty awesome story!!

Great prank by Remus! This story was nicely done. I look forward to any more of your work. Thanks once again for the story and your time.

When I saw yer name, I knew I had ter read this. I am dead chuffed that I did too. Don't think I've seen a better save from the end of Half Baked Plot. About the only explaination there could be, potions. I liked how awkward yer made them feel, just like real life. I guess it helps ter have a Mad Scientist on yer team. Keep up the good work an don't let the muggles ger yer down.

Ah, a nice evolution from the previous chapter. I like the way this one is developing now that they both know the other's feelings. It will be quite interesting to see how this evolves and what obstacles fate throws in their path.

Oh, I'm very impressed, while I noticed similarities in style w/ Madscientist, you brought a fresh prospective to the snippet. My only complaint is that it wasn't longer. I'll be looking for more from you soon hopefully. I hope DH gives a more complete story than I felt HBP did, I was left with the feeling that something was missing. At any rate happy writing and see you soon. Can't wait for more.

Oooooh! I loved it. It's very nice and I am glad that I read it. Well, now I'll check out your stories if there are any other stories.

Nice one. I hope to read more stories from you. This one was so sweet and romantic.