This story was raw, passionate and sad all at the same time. So well written that the words hit you like a ton of bricks.

Amazing.


I.R.

oh my gosh...im totally speechless...i mean, i can't understand how this fic could be entitled "survivor" at first but eventually, i came to realize it at the end...this is a very different fic...very tasteful...its totally harry-hermione but a on a different poin of view...i mean, this is a dark one...a VERY dark one at that...but then the raw emotion between harry's and hermione's characters are so strong...i can very much feel harry's anguish as if this could be based from a real experience...though i truly hope not...anyways...you're indeed one of the best fic authors out there...you think outside the box and deliver it quite extraordinarily...hope you get to write more...goodluck...

T___T
This fic made me cry a bucket load of tears.
OMG! I haven't cried this much over a fic in years.
Good job though.
It was really really well done. ^^

oh my god I don't know how I found that story but I did. And I don't know if I should be happy about it or not. On the one hand it is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read.
Your writting style is brilliant and the plot is too.
On the other hand it was the saddest story I've ever read and I had to cry. Yes I truely cried. I must say I'm not one of does girls who cries about everything. To say the truth my friends always say to me that they find me very unnatural when it cames to the point of being too emotinal, but this story especially Hermiones and Harrys letters, that was so intense and i couldn't stop my tears

But whetever I'm sad or happy that I read this story the only fact that remains is that this story is one of the best, that the story as sad as it is, is brilliant and that much more people should read it because it is, as I wrote, brilliant.

So I hope I make any sense to you

HJP

I just read the ONE AND ONLY story with so much emotion, and elegance in writing about what life meant to live and love between friend's, lover's, mentours, family.

reading what a broken heart & a lonley soul, why they cant function or have the will to live in a world without the soulmate. YOU HAVE ME SPEECHLESS, AND SOBBING.

Thank you for sharing this story, I can't even imagine what it was like for you while writing this emotionally driven story. You must be so inlove with someone, and are fortunate to exsperience such pleasure & happiness in life, if I'm so bold to say!

Hopefully in the future you will be writing again, will be watching

Wow... that trully was something... nice shot, truly sad... wow, I don't ever know what to say anymore, it really got to me...

Thanks for sharing

omg. I have no tears left. Though I\'ve read it several times before.

Oh god, now I remember why I don't like reading fic where either one of the trio die. This was truly a wonderful story but wow did it make me cry!

I'm still crying as I type this. Great story!

that was heartbreaking i am sitting here with rivers of tears streaming down my face over your story and fictional characters you are an excellent writer because of the fact your affected me so strongly. thank you.

This is one of the most heart-braking story I\'ve ever read. One of the reasons I don\'t want Hermione dead on the HP series is because I thought JKR wouldn\'t do justice to the death of my heroine, but you, you did it so wonderfully I didn\'t even notice the tears rolling down my face. Bravo, you really are a true writer.

this was exqusitely painful to read. tragically gorgerous. your interpretation of Harry & Hermione\'s relationship was dead on in my opinion, as well as the fall-out of her death. beautifully written - the characterization & dialogue were terrbily heart-wrenching. & Harry\'s letter, nearly left me in pieces.

excellent, excellent job.

This is the most beautiful and yet saddest story on PK - and maybe that I've ever read anywhere. It expresses all of the hopes and fears that we all have about loosing the person who is dearest in our lives. It makes me cry every time I read it.

I can't imagine what you have gone through to be able to write this story. It must have been awful, though.

There are so many writers who could learn from what you've done here.


the_scribbler

That was very well written. I'm sure many of us are intimate with that empty zombie feeling which you described so very aptly. I usually avoid the "Death" stories because they don't really seem to do justice to the way those left behind might feel, or they are just too sentimental and full of sadness cliches. Not this one. It was just right. I don't condone suicide but since this is fiction, I really think, given your description of the relationship and of Harry himself, that there was no other course of action for him.

Ron was wonderfully written. What a fantastic job you did having this story play out through Ron's insights and perception. He was very eloquent about Harry's feelings and about his own. Not just his feelings about Harry and Hermione's deaths, but about whatever. His feelings about their relationship, about his mother, food, bottomless emptiness, Luna, the future and anything else that came up. People do change and are influenced by the lives and deaths of others and Ron demonstrates some of the changes a person can go through.

This story was well written enough to keep my attention without a doubt. I felt the third chapter was the best. I was crying by the time Harry and Ron had their goodbye conversation because it was so well done that by that time I was feeling like Ron.

This one is definitely a keeper. I know I'll be reading more of your work. Please keep writing, for whatever reasons you do it.

Your story was very good, even though it was so sad. The degree of loss was very believable.

Thank you for sharing it.

Old_Crow

the story made me cry so much that my best friend thought that my friend in Iraq had died. I don't cry over nothing so when I tell you that I cried enough to fill a cup, know that I am just barely streaching the truth. I think that this is a beautiful story. I am planning on printing it out so that I can read it whenever I feel like it since I don't have a reliable internet service. Thank you for this wonderful story and I hope that you update 'Mistaken Judgment' soon. Thank you once more, and may your muse visit soon and often.