what a story
absolutely love it
you are going to finish it rite? i hope so.

Hey i just registered and I love the beginning of your story. keep going with and i love how you interrpeted their friendship

I totally agree with you. I love the bond that they share. It is beyond friendship it is like they are soulmates. To her he brings her spontenaity while hermione gives him a rock dependance knowing he has a loyal caring friends and teaches him to love and trust others. the Dursleys certainly did not teach him that. ron is a jealous git and he did not help him at all. yes he showed him what a family was but he left him many times. hello!he did not believe him in the goblet of fire.and ditches him in the last book. I hate ginny she fell in love with the boy-who-lived NOT HARRY! she was never a significant enough to Harry i mean she was only in the second story as bait. she never gave anything true to harry. just bcause she looks like harry\\\'s mom and they reincarnate james and lily. which I have to say i would never marry and have kids with someone that looks like my mom but since I am a girl dad. YUCK!

I'm one of PK's admins including here on the fic side, so I saw your report about my test chapter. I had very clearly marked it as a test in both the story title and fic summary fields in my role as a fic mod/admin. We PK staff do it from time to time, you know. Besides, my test was in response to an author's question which had also been asked by other authors before.

This is an excellent story I cant wait for the next update

Quick, but oh so right! Wonder how Albus will react when he finds that things have wroked even faster then he figures!

I fully agree on everything you said in the foreword concerning Harry, Hermione, HBP and JKR... for me, the HP tale as she tells it ends at book 4.9 (the bulk of OotP was good, but she was starting to go off the rails) Having said that, I have read some very good post-HBP H/Hr stories, mainly at FF.net.

Ron/Hermione is the delusion. Harry/Hermione is the truth.

Eagerly looking forwards to the next chapter in this tale. Try not to keep us waiting too long!

whens the next chapter coming, i cant wait, this story has amazing potential because of the brilliant beginning,
i only hope ur action is as good as ur fluff because you write brilliant fluff

Ok dude your story is way to wordy, i mean sure its good to fill but damn its starting to get a little boring.

Ah it was abit.. ah i dont know how to say it, but it was ok so far.

I have to say i really loved your rant, i also share your opinion when it comes to book six, and ron.... and the ships JK came up with. They all disgust me more then anything else in the world, the thought of Hermione in book six, becoming so... ugh, is the only word i can think of atm, but god how she acted over Ron and Harry ginny made me puke!

Then the whole plot of book six pissed me off to know end.

Book five kind of pissed me off aswell, i did see a more mature harry coming after book 4 but then came the agasty and emo harry. I just so wanted to hurt someone though after the end of book 5 and 6 i destoryed the book. I had half a mind to write JK and demand a refund for that trash she wrote.

Anyway hope your story will be enjoyable.

Dear god i sound like a pompuse jack ass when i read what i just wrote... ohwell!

I hope you update this story really really really really soon, cause i really really really like the ideas you have brought up so far...just found the story actually by randomly browsing the story lists. If this story has been put on pernament hold i swear i am going to go sulk for hours on end....i want to see where you take the story, it has the potential to match vox corporis. (which actually was the first fanfiction i have ever read) and have read vox corporis many many many times...that and circle's end...still like vox corporis the very best...but i utterly hate waiting for chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sooooo....your going to update soon right????

It's rushed....but if you slow things down now and start to explore the relationship, now that you've brought the two of them together, you'll have a pretty good story on your hands.

Good luck & Happy Thanksgiving.


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Excellent start. It seemed somewhat slow to develop, but I feel there's a good basis to something more. I only hope that you continue to follow this thread to completion? I anxiously await further developments.

I love this story. Please update soon. and I agree about ron's character going down the drain during the second book. about the time that he suggested flying the car to hogwarts. Idiot.

Please write more, you bring a ton of wit to the story. My main example is the way you have Dumbledore an McGonagall acting. It is clear you have made careful note of how they interact.