I have to admit I was shocked the first time I read this story - to have such an angry, ruthless Harry in the intial scenes gave me qualms, and even Hermione seemed out of character at first. But the positive thing was that no matter how they might have changed as individuals - and clearly, in the setup you have here, they would have changed, given Ron and Luna's deaths - they are still each other's touchstones. I've grown to love the story - and I would love to see more of Riley! I enjoyed her very much.

Looks like I wasn't the only one to notice the Nora Roberts and J.D Robb connection! Have to say it made me giggle reading this with all the Nora references!

Are Rogan and Riley based off of J.D. Robbs' Roarke and Eve Dalles charaters? Really good job if they are and if they aren't go read the In Death series and see how close you gat the charaters.

I don't know how many times i've read this story, but everytime- same effect, goosebumps and tears. I love it.
you're a great author
keep it up
-megz-

haha you're a j.d. robb(nora roberts) fan!!!YAY! Eve DAllas is my favorite characher ever, right next to hermione!! Rorake and harry are tied also!!

This is truly a fabulous story, great ending as well! Short but sweet, and not as angsty as i originally thought it might be, thank you for a wonderful story

you know i really loved the way that ended...i finished reading it last night but didn't get a chance to review it until today...you did a great job and it's definitely one i would read again, it's too bad you killed off ron though...anyways thanks so much for writing this, can't wait to read your other stuff

i've read almost all of your stories and this is one i haven't yet and so far i'm loving where it's going

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

I absolutly loved it. Specially loved this last scene. This is the way the seventh book should have ended, I loved it... I cried like a baby also but this has been one of my favorite fan fics. I've read your work other times and you're one of my fave authors also. Thank you for the stories you have given us through this time and keep them coming.

Thanks;

MJ

Oh my god I love you're story. I just adore the passion you put into it while still managing to keep the character's personalities somewhat similar to their real personalities. Keep it up!

For some reason, this last chapter reminded me of Sheriden saying goodbye to Delenn in Babylon 5's last episode --- Sleeping in Light. It is so sad .. and this story has been equally sad (ok, a bit smutty too ... but that's good)

Aww that was a beautiful story.

You know Rogan and Riley act a bit like Rogan and Maggie from Nora Roberts 'Born in Fire' and Eve and Roarke from the 'In Death' series.

But other than that, 'Mo Chroi' was a really good read.

i hope this isn't your last story. but, if it is, it's still a fantastic one. i love harry and hermione and ron and luna in the end. very, very sweet. i just want you to know that i've been following your work since you were on darkmark, and i really only came to portkey to follow your stories, but i'm so glad that i did. your work is amazing (MUCH better than some things that even j.k. has written) and i just think you should know that. just know that if you ever decide to come back to portkey, to all this, i'll be here ready to read whatever you have to share. God bless.

Sigh. That was so cool
I loved Harry being such a bad ass and the soppy ending. Love ya work.