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Oh my god I love you're story. I just adore the passion you put into it while still managing to keep the character's personalities somewhat similar to their real personalities. Keep it up! |
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booster-tSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 06/04/08
For some reason, this last chapter reminded me of Sheriden saying goodbye to Delenn in Babylon 5's last episode --- Sleeping in Light. It is so sad .. and this story has been equally sad (ok, a bit smutty too  ... but that's good) |
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Aww that was a beautiful story.
You know Rogan and Riley act a bit like Rogan and Maggie from Nora Roberts 'Born in Fire' and Eve and Roarke from the 'In Death' series.
But other than that, 'Mo Chroi' was a really good read. |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 19/10/07
i hope this isn't your last story. but, if it is, it's still a fantastic one. i love harry and hermione and ron and luna in the end. very, very sweet. i just want you to know that i've been following your work since you were on darkmark, and i really only came to portkey to follow your stories, but i'm so glad that i did. your work is amazing (MUCH better than some things that even j.k. has written) and i just think you should know that. just know that if you ever decide to come back to portkey, to all this, i'll be here ready to read whatever you have to share. God bless.  |
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Sigh. That was so cool
I loved Harry being such a bad ass and the soppy ending. Love ya work. |
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KimazonSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 07/09/07
Wonderfully sweet! Even the angst at the beginning was enjoyable. And that's not usually my type of HP fic. Of course I could see an angsty Harry with the loss of Ron for sure! Thanks for sharing! H/Hr forever! |
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hehe I love it, it's a great story. there were a few mistakes in there that I noticed but they were minor enough that it didn't ruin the story.
when Riley spoke of Rogan it reminded me of someone in my life. hehe. anyways... you're a great author
keep it up
-megz- |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 13/08/07
That was sad.  Ron and Luna both died.  But at least they started their afterlife together  That was pretty sweet.  I also love how H/Hr's first time was. (Even though it was rough and hard... it was really hot)  Brilliant work! |
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 such a beautiful ending for a beautiful fic, love the ending it was so emotive, it almost made me cry that part of ron and luna watching harry and hermione. great fic. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 15/07/07
Thank goodness!! I mean, I knew Harry had to win, but it was still a little touch and go there for a while.  I liked Riley, she rocked! Great story! |
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Mani12191Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 15/07/07
Aaaawww! That was so sweet and cute! I got teary eyed as well...thanks! 
Wonderful job, once again, with this story. You're so talented! *is jealous* Really am going to miss this story ): Can't wait for the epilogue though! |
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very nice. i liked it. at the end, especiallyy, they had ron's blessings (not that they needed it!) it was really cute. nice work. |
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RachelUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 15/07/07
wow that was a really good story. the end totally made me cry, but i loved it!! great job!! |
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Really good end - I hope you do get chance to write an epilogue. I'd definatley read it. I'm glad Ron and Luna are together somewhere, it makes me smile. |
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Oh, Wow, What an ending! The part at the end with Luna and Ron made me tear up a bit. I really enjoyed this story. |
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