the story is fine and the writing is good.
the story is all in all a good piece of work

Nice ficlet, it was really sweet. Good job, and i'm sure i'll read more of your work soon.

Hey, really good short fic. This would be great expanded. Ron should have been hexed into next week.

One of my favorites. I Loved it, especially the end. You should have in the summary "Even if you don't want to read all, jsut read the ene."

I quite enjoyed this - although Hermione was a little too nice to the trouble twins - and WAY too trusting of Ron.

I have been greatly enjoying your Harry McGonagall and Dumbledore answers over on ff.net.

I was referred here off of the snorkack yahoo group and by old crow.

thanks for sharing your talent
Ken

I liked it. What's not to like? Do it again.
Old Chuck

Nice story! But... does anyone ever have that easy a time bringing the subject up to the object of his affection? I'd like to read another, longer fic based on the same premise.
Thanks, Old Chuck

SEQUEL SEQUELS EQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL NOOOOOOOOOOW! lol!

Things would have worked out so much diferently had this been in JKR's mind.

That was really interesting. I really liked it. Great job. I wish this is how the book went, but unfortunately, it dind't. Great job.

A very lovely story, and very sweet. My only complaint is your use of "I" when you said, "next victim, I mean person." It ruined the feel of the story, especially as you had established it as third person. You could try, "next victim...or rather person," or something along those lines.

Anyway, as I said, it was a very sweet read, and very enjoyable.

I really like this new version of the Yule Ball. I loved the role you had Pavarti play in the story, and the Harry and Hermione scenes were really sweet. Really great!

I liked this one-shot a lot. I think that it would be cool to do a sequel of this either at the end of 4th year or a couple years later just to see the changes that could be made. Maybe even do a one-shot on the second task. I think that your suggestion about making a story on them telling their feelings due to the twin's spell would be a good and interesting as well as possibly funny story. Well i'm off to read a couple of your other stories. I like your writing style a lot and hope to see some more stories from you.

its rubbish. written and plotline, both rubbish. sorry. for the flaming and all.

Hello! I'm one of your reader in FF.net. I'm glad to see you here.. thought I'd leave you a review. Story is short and sweet as ever!