AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 28/08/08
Is this going to turn out H/h because its not really right now!!! |
Author Feedback: If this didn't turn out H/Hr, do you really think it would be posted here?
Even if I tried to slip a non-H/Hr story onto the site, I firmly believe it would've been removed.
I do realize that this is my only story on this site where that relationship isn't obvious from the first chapter, but I figured it didn't have to be. Harry was, after all, 11 years old at that time. |
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not satisfied with the epilouge leaving it up to us. good story but that ending was abrupt, a chapter for closure would have been nice |
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thank you for being merciful and not murdering sirius we all know harry didn't deserve to lose yet another parent he barely knew |
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all i'm gonna say is let the man live, it upset me enough when he died the first time around |
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a malfoy turn i do love it, you paint him as a frail and timid creature, very well done |
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marvelous, i really thinking before the end of the month i may end up finishing the library of storied you've written |
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your ignoring ron yet again but this time you don't make him seem so much a villian (so far) as you do immature. it works for me this time, harry becoming a quickly matured individual due to knowing his future and ron staying a young male. Hopefully he gets some nice moments and not turned into a jerk in this story, just cause he's not the type of guy you like doesn't mean he's gotta become a bad guy. Its much simpler to make him an extra like seamus and dean. |
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GuyroSigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 26/03/08
in the context (triwizard tournament) this sentance from your story is the best and funniest piece of fanfiction i have ever read
“I must say that was an excellent shot, Harry.” |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 31 | Date : 22/01/08
I loved the story, and it's going straight into my favs, but I think you could have bothered with a real epilogue. Or, you could have set the story three years later so Harry and Hermione would have graduated at the end of it. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 22/01/08
So Harry willingly entered the tournament? Interesting. Although, it's not fair that he ahs to face twice the dangers... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 29 | Date : 22/01/08
Great chapter. Too bad all those houses were attacked...
And I found Harry being jealous so cute!  But Hermione should stop praising Krum now, otherwise Harry might really get upset... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 28 | Date : 22/01/08
Busy Valentine here uh?  Harry was especially sweet but Neville did a good job with Ginny too |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 22/01/08
So dumbledore is going to recover? Good. I wonder how moldyshorts will take Harry running circles around him in a duel... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 26 | Date : 22/01/08
Well, I didn't expect Voldemort to be this bold. However it seems he lost this battle... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 22/01/08
Neville's right...if Voldemort has to use Parkinson as his contact inside the school, he's really scraping the bottom of the barrel... |
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