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Extenuating means: To lessen or attempt to lessen the magnitude or seriousness of, especially by providing partial excuses.
Common usage- There are extenuating circumstances.
You used- after so many hours of extenuating lovemaking.
Perhaps you ment exhausting?
Otherwise, very nice. |
Author Feedback: That's what we call 'false friends' in my language. 'Extenuating' is similar to 'extenuante', and 'Exhausting' is similar to 'exhaustivo'. They don't mean the same in English, it seems. I am going to fix that mistake, ladylaughalot.
Thanks for your review!
sakura_txell
PS: I have read all your stories, and I loved them all. Would you like to be my beta, if you have the time? If you can't, don't worry, I hope to find one some day. Thank you. |
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Have you ever heard of a three a.m. miracle? Because I'm fairly certain that's what you have in your hands. This story was absolutely GORGEOUS. One of the shortest yet best fics I've read in a long time. Your use of imagery was perfect, and despite its simplicity...argh. I don't even know how to put this into words. I feel as if I'm not doing this fic justice. *Sighs*
Well, the point is that it was lovely. It almost felt poetic. Anyway, I look forward to more stories such as these. Absolutely beautiful. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. and yes, I know about the mid night's miracle. I think mine was, since I was already sleeping, and I felt the words forming in my mind, imagining the scene, and I HAD to get up and write it down. I just needed ten minutes, and the next morning I uploaded it!
So, yes, it was some kind of miracle.
I hope you like the rest of my stories,
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
I thought it was really good. I liked it a lot.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you for the review.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
this was really good..It showed a lot of poetic interests and fihurative speech. |
Author Feedback: My mid goes poetic after midnight.
Thank you for the review.
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
Another great job. I really enjoyed it. All of your one shots are great little stories. Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: I enjoyed writing it at 2am last night!
Thank you for the review.
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