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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/10/07
I liked this a lot. You are a really good writer.
 

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Julie3291
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
Very cute little one shot. How can you not like a good Harry Hermione story. Keep up the good work.
Author Feedback: I will. Thank you for the review.
sakura_txell
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
Wow that was hot.
I love it,I enjoyed it so much.
it's was nice.
I love that Harry called " My Hermione"
That was so sweet to read that.
Keep up the wonderful and excellent work.
Sakura-txell you rock.
Well it's time for me to end this comment with a cartoon ending.
So here go's .
Tha tha tha that's all folks!
Author Feedback: Thanks for your review.
sakura_txell
 

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Lelymarques
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
I think this is a great fic!
I just think that you rushed a bit at the end. You could have made it longer. Sorry I can´t explain clearly English is not my first language
Anyaway...it was great!great job!
Author Feedback: I know, I could do all my fics longer. But I wrote this by inspiration, not planned, so I just left it like that.
Thanks for your review.
sakura_txell
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
I liked this one-shot, as well as your other ones. I think you write really well and should continue to do so. Hope to see some other stories from you soon.
Author Feedback: Thank you very much!
sakura_txell
 

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the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
nice job! your command of english is good and getting better. This is a well written love scene and conveyed the emotions really well. You should be very pleased.
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I am always worrying about my English, since I am a Spanish and Catalan speaker, and I have nobody to talk in English to. This was my second 'lemon', and I was really pleased with the outcome.
Thanks again,
sakura_txell
 

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