That was very interesting. I had never seen a similar idea written anywhere and I had had lots of fun reading it Thanks a lot for sharing!

That was hilarious. Totally, completely, irrevocably hilarious. Good bloody Job business.

For a first attempt a story this was pretty good, I can just imagine the looks on everyone's faces in the great hall if this really happened, so I was laughin my head, Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!

lol great fan fic, it gave me just the laugh i needed, thanks.

I've got to give it to you. You have an excellent imagination. This was a very... creative story. and it was awesome

I've got to give it to you. You have an excellent imagination. This was a very... creative story. and it was awesome

This was a really really good story and I like a lot. You should do more chapters for this story o do a second part for this story. Herry and Hermione forever!!!!

LOL!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please write MORE!!!!!!!

lol that's very very very funny i loved it hope yoiu update again soon

You're first attempt?! This is such an awesome fic, I just seriously can't believe this is your first attempt.
Awesome, awesome job, love your writing style.
Keep up the good work!

lil_irish_girl

Wow! That was so funny. I loved it. You should write more stories.

I thought that this was great and that the humor worked realy well and was well done.

Keep writing

Interesting plot :-)

I like it. For your first fanfic, it's really well written - no noticeable errors (at first glance), and the character are pretty, well, in-character.

Not to mention it being my favourite couple doing some wonderfully naughty things ;-)

i luv this.

it was silly and fun without being overly silly.
good job!

SEQUEL!!!!!!!!

no. sorry but no, really no. never. its just not acceptable dear.