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Lelymarques
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/10/08
Were you planning to continue this? Cause you really should. The fic has everything to become more and more interesting each chapter. I thought you were going to continue cause you put a little arrow indicating forward in the end.

Anyway I had fun reading it! Thanks a lot for sharing
 

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Ash
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/08
Well, all I can really say about this story is, it left me grinning like an idiot!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review and I hope you're still grinning!
 

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PottersGurl4ever
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/10/07
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the lovely review. I like your combination of emoticons!!!
 

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loonette7
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/07/07
How sweet! And you've managed to put all my favorite couples together!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. You must have realized by now that I love the Portkey couples and I try to incorporate them into all of my stories.
 

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britti
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/07/07
i loved this story!it was great!!i really thought the boys would be upset though about the magazine,but they werent..well cant wait till you update
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I'll let you know when the sequel for this comes out.
 

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fondlewand
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/07
This was fab! PLEASE tell me there will be more chapters detailing how Draco and Ron proposed! I REALLY want to know how Draco popped the question and what exactly was the thing on Lunas' hand! I'd love to read about all 3 weddings too! Each of the couples' have their own quirks and I think it would be great! Love Lunas unique bridemaid dress choice! I wonder if they'd all get pregnent at the same time too! I thought Harry would have gone with the rubies for Hermiones' ring, lol did he pick Emeralds to remind her of his eyes?
Fab fic, please post more!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I had another story that I had started writing that I decided to tweak to fit into this universe. The sequel will occur during Ron and Luna's wedding. I'll try to write about Draco and Ron's proposal but that will take a lot of thought.
 

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RupertsGirl112289
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/07
aww that was so cute and had all the right pairings hurray delusional ships
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I am a very delusional Fan!
 

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hermy415
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/07
that was a beautiful fic.. cute, cute, cute, cute, lovely fic.. i really loved it..

I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I'm proud to be a Delusional Harmonian as well.
 

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TogetherForever, H/Hr
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/07
Aww.... This was too cute. I loved it especially the part about the engagement.... I can't wait to be able to read more of your stories you put up here!

*%* Susanna *%*
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy my other stoies.
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
When i end my comments it's Portkey pig ending
i am sorry that did not say that before.
and i love that how you put Harry and Hermione together like this.
and so here i go agin to end mt comment.
Tha tha tha tha that's all folks!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review and I love that ending!
 

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davek
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
I had read your story al ready on fan fiction dot net, but I was log in here. nice to hear you are writing agian. I like your story as a one shot much more can't be made of it. But I liked it. altough it was a bit corny for my taste.

I hope you will write some other stories in the future.

Cia
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I know the story was a bit corny but oh well corny is nice sometimes. There is a separate story that I wrote that could fit into this timeline. It could be a sequel.
 

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FuryOfMedea
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
Great story...but is ther any way we can find out who REALLY IS the better boyfriend? Huh huh...can we...please.....
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I love your stories. I hope you update soon. Who do you think the better boyfriend really is?
 

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Jae
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
This is really a cute story, and definately an appealing concept. The way Harry proposed was rather unique (I liked the 'killing two birds with one stone' theory. It was really cute).

But anyway, could I offer some constructive criticism? I'm a grammar freak.

“He's angry but I'm sure Ron is very happy that the Canons won,” Hermione said.

“He is,” Luna confirmed with a glowing smile.

Make sure you add a comma in between the last word of the quote and the quotation mark if you don't have a period, question mark, or exclamation point there already.

Hope I helped a little! Again, cute story

much love, jae
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I have been waiting for someone to tell me the correct rules for the use of quotation marks. I really can't remember the rules and english was never my favourite subject~ Thanks for the help. I need a beta if you're interested.
 

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Churros are Good
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
Wonderful story. I liked it a lot. I'm going to read more of your things. I can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the great work, don't waste the talent.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review and I look forwad to you reading the rest of my stories. In case you're curious, I have two other stories at FF.net. I have the same author's name there so it will be easy to find. There mutli-chapter stories. If you lilke them let me know and I might start posting them here.
 

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lzod
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
*VBG* Totally loved this entire story. & yes, it does sound like Ginny, but then again, the guys should be used to this. *G*

Lisa
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I was hoping she would come off a bit like the real Ginny.
 

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