AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/08
I always love your stories and this is no exception. Your stories are unique and that is why you are one of my favourite authors. |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/12/07
It was another cute story. I love Ron and Luna and Hermione and Harry. You write them very nicely. Great job. |
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i love this. i laughed and almost cried && i rolled around on the floor and got a headache. great job. |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/09/07
I actually giggled. lol Ron thought Harry was talking about Luna!  Boy, that man is daft.  Nice work! I love it! |
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UConnFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/07/07
That was so cute! I thought the miscommunication between Ron and Harry was very in character - they know eachother so well that they just assume that the other one is referring to the same person - and absolutely hilarious. And I love how you turned what, from the opening few paragraphs, seemed like an R/H fic into a beautifully sweet H/Hr fic! Thanks for sharing! |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
Damn ! It was horrible of you to end it like that.
Anyway awesome story. I haven't seen anyone else take this approach.
Keep Writing ! |
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SochSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/05/07
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LOL!
That-
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funny!
Poor Harry... {at the beginning}.
I love how you brought up Harry's and Ginny's past. Then Rona and Luna hooking up!
~*Eli |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
Interesting story. That was so hiliarious when she said she loved Ron! |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
*chuckle* A rather heartwarming little story and I daresay that neither will find reason to complain after things settle down with each other.
Nicely done piece of work. |
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That was completely and utterly sweet, and very amusing-if I may add. The twists and turns were amazing, and I actually had fun reading it. Good Job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Vio |
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What a cute fic! Harry and Hermione's relationship here was so adorable and innocent... the awkwardness, the blushing *pinches*. It was well written and, even though it's completed, it leaves you wanting more  I also feel so honoured to know that something *I* wrote inspired people... inspired YOU! So thanks for reading MY fics and happy writing! Keep it up! |
Author Feedback: SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!
You, happy_daze, read my fic? Score! I have to tell you that you're one of my favs and when I saw Three Small Words, the plot just automatically came. Thank you so much for the inspiration and thousands of thanks for taking the time to read AND review
Viopathartic |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
Nice. But that's it. Just nice. Hermione doesn't love Harry. She loves Ron- and PERHAPS she and Harry will kiss or whatever. I don't think it's a HHr story. |
Author Feedback: At least I got "nice". I'm ashamed to admit that you are right (like all the others). This piece didn't seem like it had a finished plot. Next time (And I SWEAR on Buddha) I'll definitely finish with a solid ending.
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I have to say, this is nice. With hundreds of H/Hr short stories on this site, most of the time the plot is just rehashed from story to story. This one was new and amusing, if a bit predictable (all these short stories are). Plus lots of funny moments all over the place. Especially the beginning. What with Harry's pregnancy quip, and then envisioning a life with Hermione before - 'I love Ron.'
Only thing that's a bit weird is, Hermione seems so sure she's in love with Ron - and then, though she is a bit upset, it doesn't seem to bother her visibly (at least as far as Harry can tell), and she gets together with Harry almost without a second thought. Huh. |
Author Feedback: Oh I know! I feel so ashamed now, I should have explained the situation in detail. To be honest, I really wanted people to read this because it was different. I guess I did rush it a bit. I agree Hermione's feelings changed very quickly. Next time, when I decide to write another one-shot, I'll make sure that that the plot is thoroughly finished.
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Aw, That was so cute! I love how Harry thought Ron meant Hermione, but he really meant Luna. Yaay for Harry and Hermione taking a chance on a relationship. |
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