Respect, your one of the best portkeys authors i had the pleasure to read a story from/by.

Great story. I loved how Harry overcame the problems from his past. Also the ending was realistic, Harry didn't work things out with everyone but the people who wanted to work things out with him did for the most part.

Woooooow/ That was a brilliant story! The whole airing the dirty laundry in public was so so so deliciously satisfying! Quadruple thumbs up if I had that many!

I\'ve got no idea why, but I\'ve always loved stories where either Hermione cheated on Harry, or Harry cheated on Hermione (in some way bit or small) and they had to rebuild their relationship...I don\'t know why, but they\'re some of my favorite when written well, and i\'ve got to say I loved yours. I\'ve spent pretty much the whole afternoon and evenign reading it and it was a blast.

Very well written, very well ended. I was out of fandom for a bit, so I've only finished this now, but I didn't forget this story. I don't see things the same way you do, when it comes to philosophy of life and views of addiction, but I still enjoyed the story a lot.

I appreciate your final note, about how it's hard to leave the small things dangling, but I think it's a stronger ending if you do. They weren't central to the goal of the story, and focusing on them would have changed things. Taken them from colour in the background, and brought them to the foreground.

Thank you very much for sharing this story with us, and keep up the great work!

Well...at least she is regretting it and you have made the reader fixate on Molly as the acting role of the affair, to take away focus on Ron and Hermione being the perpetrators of the act. I still hate it though...

Reading on.

The thin red line eh?... yeah they did get resolved, as to those other questions....who cares?...

The epilogue helped, and yes i do believe that they made the right choices now after having read your story to the finish.

But hey...we are all different right..?

Good story.

Fine story, they both come out with lessons learned to make a relationship more strong and enduring.

Good work.

I guess you are right in your comments, about him being as angry as you want him to be. And that is the way it is, its your story, your Harry. But in the readers mind it it our Harry, our anger and our actions.

So i guess some people have been dissapointed about your actions in this chapter since you write the note in the end.

I would have done more, but that feeling was already there before i started reading the chapter, but the one thing i did like was the way you wrote his feelings about the whole thing, the thoughts about the doubt of having the pot of angry tip over completely. I did like the confrontation with Molly but i also felt that it lacked some more interaction from perhaps Hermione since she also was "betrayed" by her, that you made Bill take side was a good bonus and made the chapter a + chapter in my mind.

But now i am also a little confused, you state that Ron and Hermione didn't really have sex at all in this chapter, well that's Harry saying it, but i think i read before that she and him did it at least once by her account just before they were to get married?, or was that just what my mind told me in a fit of revengeful rage? (so to speak..).

If they indeed never did have sex then this story has a whole new light to it in my view since i told you in my first review what my take was on cheating....

The Harry and Luna pairing looks a little further away now.

Reading on.

Now were talking!, this is more like how i would react, so without fanfare i am moving on to what i think will be my favorite chapter!

Let the hand of revenge swing freely above the weak heads!

Having read the chapter i myself were thinking of several special scenarios where Harry and Molly would meet....and i sincerely hope you have made it a complete blowout with almost Avada Kedavra's flying around!.

The road to forgiveness is long and hard, for Harry. From my point of view i feel more for Harry and Luna than Harry and Hermione still....

You really need a REALLY good way to make me feel for the H/Hr part...

Reading on.

Had this been my story i would have stopped it with just one chapter more, where Harry and Luna actually got together and lived a happy life, where Hermione would be alone as a teacher and no one would care!.

This is actually the first time i read a story where i wish that Harry and Luna would be the perfect match!!.

I really don't see how this would work...but im reading on.

Once again we see that Molly is the main culprit here....almost.

You really want people to focus anger from the betrayal on her don't you?, so to give absolution to Hermione like it didn't even happen....

Not working here....

Well...at least she is regretting it and you have made the reader fixate on Molly as the acting role of the affair, to take away focus on Ron and Hermione being the perpetrators of the act. I still hate it though...

Reading on.

Hello.

Having been on the receiving end of a cheating girlfriend myself i find Harry's actions and feelings very clearly.

He just left, i for sure didn't, well not before i had sent the man she was cheating with to the hospital with severe concussion and broken limps.

My take on cheating: i have no respect for the ones doing it, i loved my girlfriend but the instant i caught her and the man i only hated her, haven't spoken to her since then (been over 10 years now), and never will. For all i care she could be dead now and i would only think "so fucking what...".

Next after drunk-drivers, cheating on eachother is the absolutely worst thing to do.

So i find it extremely hard to see and read how you will bring those two together again since i would Avada Kedavra her the instant i saw her i think