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oh my god... I love it. to be honest I was expecting almost something else from the summary - but this... this si sooo much better.
I love the story. It brings up just awesome images in my head. you're a great author. I'm sure you're an even better aunt also.
keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: Hah, well, I'm glad it exceeded your expectations, it was most definitely a treat to write.
Thank you so much for this read and review. |
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And people wonder why we don't want One Big Happy Weasley Family.
I adore your style of writing, it's bitter sweet - sad yet lovely. |
Author Feedback: Heh, seems like one big bomb just waiting to go off, I suppose.
Thank you for your compliments, read, and review. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/10/07
I'm sorry, but I just don't really "see" the Weasley family in all of this. |
Author Feedback: That's quite alright. THank you for the read and review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/07/07
that was beautiful it brought a tear to my eye thanks |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much.
And thank you for the read and review. |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
Awesome !
I haven't seen Ginny ever being portrayed with such a positive character.
I was left speechless by this rendering.
War really messes up our lives, doesn't it ? |
Author Feedback: It does. I think it might be a very bias opinion on my part seeing as I've studied War in huge analysis this year at school but yes, war really does kill a person inside.
Thank you for the read and review! |
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This was really sweet! Usually I hate it when authors name Harry's kid Lily, but I think this is the exception. I mean, after all, he probably would, it's just that it is used too much.
I loved Ginny in this story. Trust me, that's saying a lot, seeing as I hate that little Mary-Sue a lot. You and Hermione_Crookshanks are practically the only ones that can make me like her.
The argument between Harry and Hermione about whether Lily would be a bookworm or a Quiditch player was so sweet. I almost died right there. (I'm a hopeless romantic)
You managed to keep it in present tense pretty well! Whenever I write present tense I slowly start to slip into past, and then switch around. It confuses my readers quite a bit, so congrats!
One thing. Dad should be capitalized, because since you aren't saying My dad, it's more like a name.
Sweet story, and for once it isn't depressing!
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Author Feedback: Hehe, yes, I've recently re-read it and saw there were some mistakes dealing with the storyline and present/past tense but I'll agree, I think I handled the tense decently.
Thank you very very much for the comments, kind words, read and review! |
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DJ32Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/07
I did not mean odd in a bad way. You just dont see the Weasley Family fight like that all at the same time. Just struck me as odd to see them ALL fighting no big deal I liked it was fun thanks.
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Author Feedback: Ah, I see. Alright, thank you very much! I didn't mean to attack you there, either. Just wanted a little clarification. Thank you again for the review! |
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A beautiful and sweet story! I love it! Keep up the amazing work!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much for the read and review! I'll be updating my other fic soon. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
*chuckle* I like the low-key nature of this one. Harry, Hermione, and their daughter forming a strong and quiet family in the midst of the raucousness that is the Weaseleys. That young woman is going to have quite a time growing up with "aunts and uncles" like that bunch; I get the feeling Ginny may be the soberest of them all. |
Author Feedback: Heheh, yes, I can imagine it as well. Some families are just loud like that. Thank you for the read and review! |
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Aww.... this is a cute little story you got here. I can't wait to read more of what you have and are going to put up here!
*%* Susanna *%* |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I'll be updating The Edge of the Bed very soon. |
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Kaydeek70Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/05/07
oh this is a very sweet fic. I like it. I like that the Weasley's true colors are coming out. I just can't believe they did this at Harry's home. I can see Percy coming back to the family fold since Harry is going to have power in the world and that is all he wanted anyway is it not.
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Author Feedback: It wasn't in Harry's home, it was in the Weasley residence, I just assumed they'd have a room for Lily. Thank you for the read and review, although I don't really understand what you mean by Percy. |
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DJ32Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/05/07
That was a bit odd but well writtin. Thanks for the time you put in. |
Author Feedback: A bit odd? How so?
Thank you for the read and review. |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/05/07
That was sweet and sad all at the same time. I'm not sure how you managed to write that that way, but it's great: such turmoil and such sweet innocence all in the same story with just over 1,000 words. Very good job!
When Harry tells the Weasleys that they're spoilt is the best part in the entire story. I think it really hit the nail on the head for the Weasleys. (If only they'd listen to him.) I agree, though, that any child of Harry and Hermione would be a great mixture of her parents. I'm sure she would be a beautiful person inside and out.
I have to admit, that I really feel sorry for Lupin and Tonks. I hope that they're love can make it through anything.
Congratulations on being an aunt! Babies are wonderful little miracles from God! I'm sure you're an awesome aunt.
Thanks for posting and keep up the great work! |
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you very much! I had an idea and just started typing. It seems you got it quite well. Thank you very very much, I'm really flattered. Thank you for the read and review. |
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char_m_edSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/05/07
Your new fic!
I love it as usual!
It's great...
I've seen you around in AF, I wonder if you're going to be there again..
LOL! Love the OBH.P.F!
OBHWF... Mmmmm... let me think about that...
NOPE!
I love how you turn OBHWF into OBHPF! |
Author Feedback: Yes, I've recently signed up on it but probably won't be going on it all that much. I might be posting some fics there, as well.
Thank you for the review, the OBHPF makes me happy as well! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/05/07
I thought that it was a very cute one-shot and enjoyed it a lot. |
Author Feedback: Well, thank you very much! I like your review, short and to the point. Thank you for the read, as well! |
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