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This story is good and sad. It is a very good idea of a story. |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/07
Oh dear, you nearly made a grown man cry! 
Very well written. You can almost feel their pain and heartache.
I know this is a one shot, but it would be nice if you wrote another piece about a year or two further on, and let us know that they had another baby.
Gives us all a little hope. 
Great job.  |
Author Feedback: hrm, well that is something I could do of course. I'm not really one for sad endings, (which is why I hardly write drama) but I will think about doing that.
I'm glad it touched you, I really wanted to get the pain across. Anyway, thank you for reviewing, and like I said, I will think about writing a sort of epilogue to it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/05/07
I liked it a lot. It was sad but by the end , it got better |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it, and thankyou for reveiwing. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/05/07
Well, that was quite depressing. I don't want that to be the last thing I read before I go to bed. It was reallly great though. Very sad, I would hope that their child's death woudln't tear them apart. Wow, that was really great though.  |
Author Feedback: i know it was really sad, (I actually cried when I wrote it) but I really wanted it to seem real. I know how horrible it is for couples when they lose a child, so I tried to show that distancing that can sometimes happen.
I hope you saw the positive side at the end though. I really wanted to show that hope can still come, even though despair seems to overrun eveyrthing.
Thanks for reviewing. I always love it when you stumble into one of my fics |
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Wow, that was quite sad - but I'm glad that they are going to get through it, that Hermione won't let this tear them apart. Nice job! |
Author Feedback: Thankyou. I'm glad you saw the positive side of the end. I couldn't bare to have it too depressing, but I still wanted to keep the realism of what it's like when you lose a child.
Thanks again for reviewing. |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/05/07
Oh, that is so sad! It was heart-wrenchingly good, though. You wrote it so well. Thank you for posting it. Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: I know, I actually cried when I wrote it! But I've had this idea in my head for a while, so I am glad that you enoyed it. Sometimes I think it is good to write something that is sad once in a while.
Thanks for reviewing. |
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