AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/07/07
Oh, swoon. ABsolutely 100% fluff, but I loved it. Thank you for the Harry/Ginny bashing. They are terrible together. Reading the Half-Blood Prince was almost painful. But your story was excelent, made me smile. |
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BakaNekoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/05/07
God HHr stories are my drug.I just love this story, it catches Hermione's obsession perfectly. |
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i liked it a lot, but i think you should have written about how they got together and all that.
i was kinda confused for a second, i didn't realize time had passed.
maybe you could clarify that? between the paragraphs write "blah blah months later..." or something?
great job, though.
excellent writing.
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Author Feedback: Thank you for the lovely review, and for taking the time to leave one.
About your suggestion of adding "months later" well... I actually intended people to be like 'what?'.... Aaaaaah they're already together..." at the end, so...
If I actually find the inspiration to write how they got together, I will, but this is intended to be a one shot.
Thanks for reading! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/07
well you built it up to the point where we thought they were not dating...you should have given a little inclination that they were together.....otherwise...it wasnt that bad |
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lol, i think you captured the whole drug theory quite nicely. that's exactly how I feel when I get a crush and you couldn't have explained it better! great job! |
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ArimaiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/07
Dirty Little Secret eh? Where you perchance thinking of the song mate? Brilliant alternate to your other work, The Reason. He he carry on kid. |
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atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/07
I loved it! I liked it! I definately did not hate it!  Short, cute and rather amusing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/07
um... what? i thought harry and ginny...? was it a dream or something? ok, that was weird. but good description. |
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mimiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/07
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/07
Yeah I liked it but I think there should be an next chapter to go further about it. Anyway I liked all the parts where Hermione drifted all up in to her thoughts. |
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Now this really great. Loved how she reprimanded herself every other sentence and started obsessing again. My favorite part was about his voice, especially reading her second favorite book. Very Hermione. I only have a small quibble. I've never been a fan of netspeak in fics (having seen enough of bad ones) so instead of saying OMG, how about "Brilliant" or "Merlin, Harry, you're so perfect"? Nice job! |
Author Feedback: Hi!
First of all, thank you for the wonderful review.
As for ginny's "OMG"... Well, I'm not a fan of netspeak either, but I tried to make her sound even more air headed than normal (am I being too mean?); specially coming from Hermione's perspective.
thank you for reading! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/07
Im actually quite confused... is harry cheating on ginny by having dated hermione for 8 months? I like it, but its not that clear. |
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good stuff! i like the buildup and analogy, and of course a fluffy little twist. thanks for the fun read! |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/07
You're right, it was pure, unfiltered sweet fluff. But it was wonderfully written and really hit the spot this dreary morning. I liked the little twist at the end; I didn't expect that they would already be together.
All in all a really good, fluffy, uplifting story. Thanks for sharing. |
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update again it sounds really intersting!... althought i am a bit confused i would love to read more |
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