That was very angsty and beautiful. Just now getting caught up with some of my reading ... I had found a couple of your older stories saved to disk at home and have been enjoying reading them over and over. I don't have access at home so I have to read only the non adult ones at work.

Take care and keep writing ...

As Always,
Muirnin - who will always use Jane as Hermione's middle name despite canon ... seeing as that is the RIGHT middle name not the easy one!

awwww. that was sad, but sweet. it made me cry.

OMG That was sooooooo sad. I almost cried. (I didn't because the computer's in the family room)Poor Harry! I it !

Sorry, Misti dear, that I didn't read and review this earlier. I was... anti-angst for awhile.

I love that Harry wakes up in the middle of the night and KNOWS that she's in grave peril.
Very nice with how you showed him finding her first with his mind, then desperately running towards her.

Their last moments were beautiful and heartrending.

I liked that the piece ended one year later and with the knowledge that Voldemort made a grave error.

I think you caught Harry's personality well. He can be very ill-tempered if someone messes with his loved ones after all. Your writing is good, but on the whole I just thought this story was too cliche. If she has a gaping head wound I don't think she would be doing much talking, but I don't want to sound mean so I apologize if I do. The structure was good and on the whole I'd say you did a good job. Just keep writing and see where it takes you. Best of luck!
~Kura

Aw, it's sad but it so sweet. Poor Harry. Your Fics are always so good, keep writting!

Gracious, you're going to make me cry! That's so sad! I guess I can't say I wasn't warned, though, but that doesn't make it any less...painful.

That's just awful - beautiful, but awful. I hope nothing like this happens in the book. That would just be horrible.

You did a great job, though. Thank you for posting it, and keep up the good work.

Hey, if Harry killed himself, then he would be with Hermione sooner, right?

So sad... I cried. And this sure was a nightmare, I haven't had one of those yet, about Harry and Hermione, I mean...
This was beatiful...

*sob* Beautiful but tragic! Keep up the amazing work!

wow. sad, angsty...but, it was GOOD. lol. that scene with hermione reminds me kind of that one in pearl harbor when they land those planes in china and that one guy, danny, is dying and that other guy cums over and aids him and he's like, "i'm so cold" and the others like, "no you...cnat die.noo..your going to be a dad..." and alll that. lol, except for that was between two GUYS so they didnt share deep undying love adn tell eachother they loved eachother. anyways, gret job. loved it. muuch muuch love!!

*cries* OMG! What a beautiful story! I'm one of those fans of angst, so I think this is terrific. I'm sorry that you're stuck on Guardian, but if we get this fic because of that... I'm kinda okay with it. lol

I got chills when reading the words on her headstone, and had tears in my eyes during her final moments. Wonderful job on that! Very heartfelt, and emotional.

Love it!!
~Cat~

Wow, that must've been a horrilbe memory for you. Good luck with writing the Guardian. I havne't read it myself. I might go and read it when I have the time. Loveyl job on this...it's very sad that Hermione had to go and die. Great job.

Aww so sad, but touching. It is good to hear from you again. You haven't lost your touch though! Hopefully your writer's block will be broken soon so we can see what is going on with the Guardian.. Hang in there Misti, we all appreciate what you do for the H/Hr community