Lovely chapter, I'm glad Harry decided to give Hermione some time, I hope he'll reveal his feelings to her soon enough. And why oh why does she have to be abducted again? That's just so unfair  Until next chapter, let's hope it doesn't take you that long |
Author Feedback: it has to be done...  the story won't end just like that....i have some more ideas playing in my head  |
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paulmossSigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 30/07/09
Loving the story, it's nice to find one that doesn't involve magic. It is really well written, to the point where reading certain sections of the story were difficult to read. Not because they were poorly written, but they provoked the strong feeling that something bad was going to happen. The one sectionthat springs to mind is the ball when Harry is talking to Cho. I persevered and glad that I did. Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: thank you.... i don't know what to say about the writing though.... i'm not really sure about that.... |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 24 | Date : 30/07/09
Additional Review:
After re-reading the chapter once again, I do like your narrations from both's POV especially from HIS. I loved the way HE had attempted to convey HIS feeling towards HER by HIS manners, doings and flowers. However all those seemed not give HER a clue. In my opinion, HE should have said those magic words. But I guess you'd keep that until you see the time comes, don't you?
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Author Feedback: yep, i would...hahaha.... |
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salethUnsigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 30/07/09
"Until next time" is very ok, after all I had always liked to read this fic over and over again, every time you post a new chapter! So... until next time! |
Author Feedback: that's definitely comforting...thank you so much! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 30/07/09
hi
un capitulo muy excitante, y emocionante espero anciosa el proximo update |
Author Feedback: Gracias! Aprecio su revisión! |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 24 | Date : 30/07/09
This was a really good chapter! I loved it and I cant wait to read more! Please update again soon! |
Author Feedback: aw....i'm happy you did! |
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mi.nathyUnsigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 30/07/09
so no problem waiting since the chapters are so good...look forward to the next chapter |
Author Feedback: thank you.... i'm glad you liked it. |
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HdawneSigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 29/07/09
YEA!!!!!
I haven't checked PK in a while, to be honest. How wonderful that today I pop in and your story is updated!
Again, a most wonderful read. You are quite talented m'dear. I sincerely hope you finish this story because I am truly addicted. It is my favorite on PK, and quite frankly my favorite (I don't want to call it fanfic) unpublished fiction online right now.
I know I'm terribly impatient and wish there were more updates...well, more frequent updates. But I understand that when you just don't have the time and sometimes the will to write.
I do hope a new chapter, since you left this (once again) on a great cliff hanger, will come soon. However, I will patiently wait if I must.
Thanks for an amazing read this afternoon with my tea (how cliche! ahahaha)  |
Author Feedback: *Sigh*
It has never really struck me that people like my work for what they are, but people like you come and tell me things i secretly hope to read, and it makes me feel so much better inside. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Your words are very flattering and encouraging. frankly, i have always wanted to be an author. It's just i don't have enough courage in my ability to believe that I can be! For now, I'm content with your praise and I'm keeping it close to my heart as I write the next chapters of this.  |
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oh. it was wonderful, didn't notice you didn't have experience in writing it. I guess it sort of wrote itself, no? The way they are just makes it easier, I think.
oh, no, Hermione. Hopefully the friend she saw across the street would figure our Harry was inside the store and tell him immediately! unless he was part of the plan to make her not notice the carriage. grr. then he is no friend.
wonderful work. will wait for more.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you...at first i didn't get what you said in the first part, but yeah...I think you're talking about the love scene? Hehehe...I have plenty of reading experiences but never writing ones, so this would be my first. So far, so good. I didn't expect it to be effective, but no one's commented against it yet, so that works for me.... |
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Luvin it so far. You're a Pinoy too? I'm only 14 but I love to read a lot of books and fanfics. Harmony is my favorite! |
Author Feedback: Yep...mine too, else I wouldn't be here. but then i've already accepted the real ending of HP. But that doesn't mean i would write about them. I'm perfectly contented with writing stories that fit Harry and Hermione as a couple. Someday, i hope to convey to those non-believers that we had a reason to actually believe that Harry and hermione would end up together...
And yes, I'm Filipino. But I live in Canada now.... |
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atiqahSigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 29/07/09
NO  To be abducted the first time was bad enough. Now you're leaving us barely an inch from the cliff while she's being abducted for the second time. Oh the suspense. |
Author Feedback: Oh come on! You gotta be used to it by now! Heheheh...i'm a fan of suspense and cliffies, so yeah....if you notice, though...most of my chapters end in cliffies! Thanks for your comment! |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 24 | Date : 29/07/09
Worth for waiting. A bit disappointing that HE still didn't say the Words which would have made THEIR real first night perfect.
Don't abandon the story too long, again.
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Author Feedback: thanks...gotta have bit of suspense when it comes to their revelation. I didn't want them both saying it at the same time. but I have plans for Harry's. Won't be too long before that. But yeah, I'm going to start on the next chapter right now. My hand's itching to type. Hopefully i'd be able to have the energy to go on. Thanks for still reading! |
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sandris*Signed | Chapter : 24 | Date : 29/07/09
yeyyyyy that was a great chapter!! i was so happy at the beginning but now i'm depress!!! they were so happy and then BANG! the drama kick in again  ...i'll be hoping desperatedly for next update !
BTW i'm also a fan of DBSK although i havent heard anything since MIrotic and Hey dont bring me down, i think they are promoting their japanese single right now. |
Author Feedback: WOW!!!!! Who'd have thought there's another DBSK fan here? I really didn't think anyone would reply to that. Hahah...we gotta hook up on IM then! I LOVE them so much! I became a fan when my cousin showed vids of them to me. The first song that I ever really liked was Mirotic. For me, that sealed the deal. They're so talented, eh? My favorite's Hero (Jaejoong). just thinking bout him gets me inspired  . Hahaah! I've recently been splurging my money to collect their albums and concert dvds. Their Japanese concerts are SOOOOOO much better. My favorite's Five in the Black Tour. That concert was just PERFECT!
Anyway, i hope to catch you online some time. What country do you live in?
As for the story, well, it can't stay happy all the time. The story's nearing an end. I think after this chapter, you'd notice that my time frame and pace would be quicker than ever. I'm anxious to end this fic for myself and for the readers. It's been too long. i doubt people would stick with me if i let this story go on and on forever!
But thanks for your reply...i'm giddy right now because of DBSK. hehehe |
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omg! it was a long wait but it was worth it. lol. it was great! and i really can't wait for the next update but the wait won't matter if the next chapter is as great as this one, which i'm sure it will be. =] |
Author Feedback: oh thank you...hahah...i was kinda nervous about this chapter although not overly concerned about what people would think about it. I guess It's because I'm resigned over the fact that it's not the greatest that I've done and I just wrote it for continuity. Hopefully, the next chapters would be better in my point of view. There's nothing to bum you out more than your own criticisms! hehehe...but thanks for your appreciation! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 29/07/09
lol... i loved the chapter and can't wait for more. when i found the update i was so excited i could hardly wait to read it. can't wait to read what happens next. |
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