Hi. I just thought that I'd check in to see if you had updated. No luck. Darn. O well.
Anyway. I want to say that I love this story and am really looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Please don't let DH negitively influence you or make you decide to discontinue this fic. The beautiful thing about fan fiction is that we get the chance to go around "fixing" the stuff in cannon that we don't like.
Anyway. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
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hagridSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 28/07/07
I hope Ron knows if he acts the git again, I won't need ter use a wand, Ill rip him apart with me bare hands. Can't wait ter hear how he found the house though. |
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hagridSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/07/07
Well I enjoyed it when I read it before, ever hopeful that it could happen, and nows thats it completely AU I like it even more. Sort of a 'What could have been' scene. |
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mindysmeUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 10/07/07
Loved it! I am glad that you enjoy writing Harry/Herminone fights (and the make ups/make outs)because I enjoy reading them! Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter. |
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AJ PotterUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 10/07/07
Are you sure your not a closet Hermione and Ron fan? You really do seem to like the bickering, a bit overly much, I'd say. Harry and Hermione never fight this much. Odd that they chose to share a room with Ron, with all the rooms available. I like the idea of the use of the school, and am curious what you'll do when the school term starts. |
Author Feedback: Lol, I am sure that I'm not a closet Heron. The way I see it, Harry and Hermione have personal issues that won't just go away because they're together. Besides, if HBP showed something, it was that their relationship isn't perfect.
I don't see it as odd that they were in the room with Ron. I like to think that he *can* be mature, and by accepting Harry and Hermione as a couple is a big step.
I'm very happy that you're liking my story. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review the chapters. It means a lot to me. |
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AJ PotterSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 10/07/07
Definately shorter than you have been doing, but you accomplish several goals. A link to Hogwarts, another person to trust, his friends acceptance of his unusual talents, and good teamwork. A nice chapter all in all. |
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AJ PotterSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 10/07/07
No hurries. Its a good story, and they can be hard to come by. Very good chapter. I see the pattern in a return at times of 5th year harry with his sudden anger and snapping at people. Your Ron is impressing me with his maturity. |
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AJ PotterSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 10/07/07
Ron's comment about them fighting was nice. I'm not sure I liked the fight. Some fighting I agree to, but they seemed more silly than anything. Anyway, Ron really is having some great ideas. Surprise, surprise. I do think it odd that someone who couldn't properly apparate is now doing so with two others easily. And is Harry 17? Just curious cause you never said, and if they have two months till term, he can't be. |
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AJ PotterSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/07/07
Wow. You definately turned up the heat in that chapter. Loved the concern for Hermione, and that the damage inflicted by the horcrux. It didn't go easily. Harry and Hermione's excitment and celebration was great. I like the clarity they get from love, and the way you weave that into the scenes. Great cliffhanger at the end. I'm guessing Snape, as he called Ron an "Idiot Boy." |
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AJ PotterSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 10/07/07
Good chapter. The colloportus on every door and window seems a bit intense, but I get what you're going for with them being cautious. I liked the way the discover the theory about using Harry's blood to destroy the horcrux. It's an interesting, and new, theory. |
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AJ PotterSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 09/07/07
I thought it was reasonably well done, except for Hermione leaving and then returning so quickly. I apprecaited Harry's remarks to Ron about how he's treated Hermione over the years. That's one of the main reasons I don't see them as a couple. He insults her and hurts her feelings too much. Harry's remark about the eyeliner and the shirt is a different touch. You don't always think of Hermione and make up, but then again, that's some eyeliner to last until the next day. Nice scene with them, and I like it better that they are avoiding the others. |
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AJ PotterSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/07/07
Beautiful chapter, like the way it all flows, and figuring out who RAB is. The piece with Ron noticing their private moment at the end is great. And Molly's "Where have you been?" I can still hear from the second film. |
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AJ PotterSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/07/07
I like the way it goes to the door that is always locked being unlocked. Fits perfectly with Dumbledore's belief that love would be Harry's greatest weapon against Voldemort. Really nice chapter, though a lot of potential fall out as well, since she was essentially still leading Ron on in this chapter. |
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KatUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 09/07/07
THANK GOD YOU'RE BACK!!! I missed your writing so much.
This was ur best chapter yet (loved h/hr fight). Do u know when next chapter is? Please keep me posted. |
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Mione757Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 09/07/07
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