I have read this and must admit I am enjoying it, the thing I dont understand is why you have turned Harry into another Ron and you seem to have lost Hermione\'s personality somewhere along the way. Still it wont put me off finishing it.

great story! just how i imagined it! write lots more please!!

I'll never be disapointed! I love your writing. And I'm ticked with the last book too .

Keep on writing brilliantly, and show JKR what harmony is really about

Don't you listen to the Mister Nymous! This story is wonderful, and every fanfiction writer KNOWS that every once in awhile, breaking with the canon can bring a breath of fresh air to and otherwise over-used topic.

And, while that 'over-used topic' doesn't describe the H/Hr pairing in the slightest, I am still enjoying immensely your takes on the characters, their emotions, and the plot in general.

Keep it up.

I say just add, then Ginny woke up and had to go to Harry and Hermione\'s wedding, at the end of the epilogue. lol

lol . wow and i thought i was the only one who thought that about DH. what ever. ill be sure to read ur next chaper(s)

I'm so glad you're not giving up on this story. As hard as DH was to swallow I believe we fanfic writers need to carry on the H/Hr ship. Please update soon

I totally agree with you. Evedently Ms Rowling had a OBHWF fixation from the very beginning and when she found that her charactors had strayed from what she wanted (Harry and Hermione's close relationship in the books and I don't mean as brother and sister) she had to make changes in the last two books to make it work her way. I'm glad for Fan-Fiction because Harmony will live forever as long as we have Authors to continue writing it.

Hi There

happy to know that you are going on with the story, I hope that all the harmonians writers do the same and write more stories of our belove ship. Actually waiting for the new chapter



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JK is weird and sexist. That's all I have to say about that.

But I love your story! H/HR will ALWAYS be a zillion times better than boring Heron caca.

dh was so despointing in many many many levels not just the ships so i am all for your evil version

No need to give up on this story. JKR is a fascinating and imaginative author who can't write character interaction for crap. A number of people I know who weren't Harmonians now are, solely because of JKR's incredibly forced R/Hr H/G in Book Seven.

Let me state that again, more baldly: Casual fans, who either had no shipping preference or were inclined towards Harry/Ginny, now realize it has to be H/Hr, because that's the way JKR wrote it, and they simply can't fathom how it's all suddenly R/Hr and H/G.

The anvils all have H/Hr on top in big, bold letters. It's JKR's fault for standing under them.

great story. i really love this story. i cant wait to read the rest.

I would first like to say that my friend and I enjoyed our reading of this section. However, I doubt that we enjoyed it for the reasons you would desire.

Your writing style is nicely developed, and, aside from a few small spelling and grammatical errors, I did not find fault in it. I did find your content faulty, though. There was a large amount of angst. This is not bad in and of itself, but when overused, it gets very old very quickly. You overused it quite a bit. What reason would there be to have so much angst after they confess love to each other? For that matter, why would there be love for each other? Your story goes entirely against canon, and that is counting the fact that it was started before Deathly Hallows came out. Harry and Hermione are both totally out of character, and Ron's character is exaggerated. Please, for the sake of all our eyes, stop work on this story.

I agree with everything that you have just said. I can't wait to see the next update and am glad that you did decide to continue with the story.