Wargh, very cute and fluffy story! Absolutely loved it, I've got the cavity as proof!

um, you really should consider doing somethign about the formatting of this chapter... i had a terrible time trying to read it until i finally just copy-pasted it into my word lol...

I look down to investigate the noise and just stared—there on the floor with his stupid tube socks was a black velvet box. I reached down gingerly, already knowing what was probably inside but unable to keep from opening the box just the same. Inside was a brilliant diamond ring, impressive even to bloke, but it only succeeded in filling me with more anger.


certainly didn't expect that move, but it's rather typical, isn't it? nice surprise there, it was an interesting twist and i look forward to seeing it played out as this deff can't be the end of the ex when he was planning on proposing of all things.

That was such a great fic! I had a lot of fun reading it and thanks a lot for sharing

Oh no something is going wrong? Well I hope it isn´t anything too serious hehehe

I definitely liked it! And I´m going to read the next chapter right now cause I am super curious. I kind of wish Harry had encountered Hermione's ex to read what was going to come out of it

love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it.

Hey!

You're a great writer & I hate that you're leaving PK. I've enjoyed this story alot and think that we're all happier for having gotten a chance to read it

Please - come back often & check the site. I'm hoping that you'll be inspired again to write and and your talent & pov to the genre.

Regards,

the_scribbler

I like how you made Hermione's planning to move out really subtle.

It's pretty funny that Harry and Hermione were watching Episode II since a lot of people say that it was basically the 'love story' film.

The three best parts of that movie are...

1.) when Anakin is spinning with two lightsabers,possibly the best move ever.
2.) The Yoda/Dooku fight
3.) The reveal of Anakin's golden arm.

Ahh,I bet Harry will enjoy the 'catching up' immensely.

I like how you described Harry's reaction to Hermione's remodelling job in the bathroom and what was going on in his head.

It gave it a "How to Lose a Guy in 10 Days" feel

Even though I am a guy and was forced to sit through it (or sing along with my sister's Cheetah Girls CD through every song, in a performance for my entire family to go into a recording for future generations to mock me about)
it actually was pretty good.

Most people over-do that reference but you were spot on(suprisingly I have never used that phrase before now, I don't even know if suprisingly is spelled 'surp' or just sup!

I wish I could have lived in this universe and been either friends with the trio or at least been in the same class as Hermione solely for the purpose of seeing the look on her face when she realized(yep I used a 'z' too!)what she told Harry to buy!!

Hmm...Harry Repressed Emotions Potter, well he has lived up to that name hasn't he?

Wow, love the story, it's absolutely perfect. Update soon! Can't wait! Keep up the great work!

awwee this is my favorite story. great job on it :] it was great. i cant wait for your next one. your a great author. this story was amazing :] very well written :]

much love ♥
muahh;]

I loved that the story was in Harry's POV,I don't see a lot of fanfics in that style.Keep up the great work!

thanks for a nice happy conclusion - keep up the good work with your fics

Aw, I just loved the ending! LOL @ Harry & Hermione's Star Wars talk. Yaaay to Harry and Hermione finally figuring out that they belong with each other.