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haaha. me again. cute. but may i add my opinion of a one chapter continuation. just one chapter. but it was GREAT! Lol. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/04/07
This is very interesting. Great job on this. I thought it was a little weird, but I really liked it. |
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It's a nice ficlet. Great portrayal of Harry's cluelessness. However, it's incomplete, and you need to write more. |
Author Feedback: I'm working on it!!! 7th Year fics are hard to do since they are the most common story. |
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*laughs* And Harry doesn't even realize his freudian slip... That's perfect... Hilarious! Good job! As you said, Hermione doesn't even need to be there, and she effects the outcome alot.  And he doesn't even get it... *pats Harry on the head* He really is clueless! Well done! Keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! It seems like some people just can't suss this one out for some reason. I'm glad you did and you enjoyed it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/07
Bravo! This has got to be one of the cleverest and funniest H/Hr fics in history! I think keeping it this way, i.e. a one-shot, is part of the cleverness. You are certainly one of the most interesting fanfic authors around. Hope to see more stories from you. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Can you explain that to about every other reviewer please?  |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/07
Okay, can someone explain to me how this is classed as H/Hr?
This is clearly H/G. Didn't like it at all. Sorry. |
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jjUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/07
I really don't know what are you doing here on Portkey. You aren't a HHr shipper, or write HHr fics at all!
And what was that with 'THe Transfer'? So, EVERYONE was right- the STORY WASN'T a HHr story but a Oc/Hr fic. Because, if it really was a HHr you wouldn't have taken it off.
R.I.D.I.C.U.L.O.U.S
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Author Feedback: Yeah, after much internal debate I decided to remove the transfer. The analogy I use to describe it is a road trip. H/HR would have ended up some nice scenery along the way, but they weren't the reason for the trip, they weren't the plot of the story. It was always going to be about the OC. So, it's gone.
This story isn't blatantly H/HR either, at least not in your face, snogging session in the broom closet h/hr. If that's what you're after, there are literally 1000 other authors out there writing it as we type, so be patient. Something you like will come along...
Oh and out of curiosity, what does R.I.D.I.C.U.LO.U.S stand for? |
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That was hilarious. You are a very good author. I can't believe he couldn't figure out what he did wrong. This would explain a lot about their relationship and breakup. Well chosen title, I can see where you involved that. I wish it were longer though or another chapter was added. Either way it was very good.
You have good stories. The Transfer was one of my favorites before it dissappeared. I read it before as an anomynous reader. Do you think you could send it to me at unabridgethinker2489@hotmail.com? I really liked and always wondered whatever happened. Keep up the good work. I hope to read more of your work in the future.  |
Author Feedback: Sure, I'll send it, though it is unfinished... |
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AWESOME!! That would so explain why Ginny took the breakup at the funeral so well. Great story. |
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MmeFleissSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/07
LOL! Poor clueless Harry just doesn't get it.
Glad to see you've posted something new, by the way. |
Author Feedback: Frustratingly clueless, that Potter lad!
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/07
I don't get it... why does he say ginny?
great plot and one shot keep writting |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/04/07
I have a question is this a H/Hr story or H/G story? Because Hermione was not even in the story and it did not end with H and Hr being together. So if that is the case I think it violates the Rules here in Portkey that you can start the story pairing either H or Hr with another character but it should end with H and Hr. Just asking. |
Author Feedback: Sure, Hermione is in the story... in spirit at least. In fact, she is so prevalent in the story that she didn't even have to say a word to affect the outcome... |
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HarmboSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/04/07
Hmmm... The fic itself is ok, well written and all, but did you realize that it violates the TOS for Portkey? Meh, not that I really care... |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/04/07
Oh !
Not to worry though Harry and Hermione are meant for each other and will always get together in the end. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/04/07
This was a great, awesome job. Too bad it was a one shot, would of like to read more.
Are the author of The Transfer?
I really like that story but it disappeared... |
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