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Ash
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/08
Nicely done nothing like a bit of fluffyness to brighten up the day! You were right,it was more PG13 than R, I think Ive atually read a PG13 story that was more graphic than this but nonetheless I had fun reading it
 

yesi
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/07
Very good response, cliffy ending but still very good job!
 

Soch
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/04/07
Well now! *THAT* Hermione is one randy girl! I kinda wish this story had gone on a little longer, but I won't argue with your bunnies.

... but maybe if you put a few of them together, they might start little families. I mean, it's what bunnies are best known for, no?

Ok, I'm throwing out dirty metaphores... I mist stop.

Thank you for sharing! Keep up the good work!
 

sad2bsony
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/04/07
Tease!!!! I wanted to see what methods he was talking about! Oh, well good story by the way.
 

BloodyRegrets
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/04/07
Sorry I didn't get to review view on this sooner, but I really love the whole attiude that both Hermione and Harry has, and especially what was going through Harry's head. The whole ..the Trophy Room was the Hogwarts version of Love Den ...but Harry was sure Hermione would quickly deduce what his suggestion might mean. There were plenty of other ways to get to the Library without using the Great Hall or the Trophy Room. He braced himself for the imminent `No', but amazingly, heard a “Yes” instead... Part, and I like the krum part, and the Pomfrey & Filch part, that was funny. It was really good, I'll read some of your other fics, later when I have more time.
~Tiffany ^-^
 

dumbledorefan729
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/04/07
i dunno if its just me but i personally think the puns where abit too cheesy.
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Nicely done! Hee hee, I love how Harry wanted to get Hermione in there before she knew what it was used for and how Hermione was already about 20 steps ahead of him.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Woah...Was that ending hot or was it just me? I love it...please update soon? Love, Ashley
 

the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
OK - so I can't resist. Gonna have to take it into my own hands and finish this scene. It's too good to resist. I'll post under my name & link back to yours!

Thanks
 

gupper
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
This story was great fun. I'm glad you decided to take Miss Mady's challenge -- it was too good to pass up. You did a great job with it, too -- although I could have done without the Filch/Pomfrey mental picture!
 

the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Nice! I like it...but DAMN, it needs more detail at the end! Hermione is SO shaggable and well - I'd love to see where your mind goes with it. I know where MINE went!

 

the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Nice! I like it...but DAMN, it needs more detail at the end! Hermione is SO shaggable and well - I'd love to see where your mind goes with it. I know where MINE went!

Author Feedback: Yeah, sorry, my mind went blank. There will be no sequel from me, but I know atleast one other person took up the challenge-and they were headed in the NC17 direction.

glad you enjoyed the story!
 

shshsh
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Oooh !
First fic I've read where Hermione initiated everything !
Anyway that was a good one ... keep em coming.
 

MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/07
ooh. that was so cute! i really liked it. hahaha. she was so impatient. i need to find myself a trophy room now.. great work.
 

Michelle Moonshine
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/07
Good job on this challenge! I wish it had been NC17, and maybe just a bit longer since they'd only just realized that the other felt the same way as they did (but Harry still hadn't told her he loved her, so I was hoping he would).
Nevertheless, it was a very enjoyable read, and it was well written.
The bit about Filch and Pomfrey was disturbing, but in a good way
All in all, it was very nice.
-Michelle
 

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