JustMioneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/06/07
Hm... intresting intreaging how do you spell that anyway on to the next chapter
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That was short but of course, as always, awesome. I adore it. Keep this wonderful work up!
and I love the renaming... instead of calling it saving people thin, you call it superman complex. Awsome |
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Well done. A good point for Hermione, that she'll lie to him or do basically anything for him to keep him safe. Enjoyed this a lot, can't wait to read more from you! |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Hmm. Interesting look at Hermione and not one I'd considered before, but you make a very good argument for her having a superman complex, as well as a convincing one establishing Harry's as well. Nicely done! |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Excellent! Nice retelling of all the reasons why Harry is the hero, worthy of Hermione ... and the final sentence is an excellent turnaround. Good stuff! |
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gupperSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
I thought this was lovely. It didn't need to be romantic to illustrate the depth of feeling and understanding Hermione has for Harry.
I also rather liked how brief the story was, if you can believe it. It got the message across without any superfluous prose or unnecessary tangents -- perfect for what you were trying to say. Well done! |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
I think that Hermione just has a Saving Harry complex. If anyone other than Harry was in trouble, there would be a price that is too high for her to pay to rescue them e.g. she wouldn't sacrifice her family to save Ron, but she would sacrifice them to save Harry. |
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This is a really good story idea and I love the title. I'll wait eagerly for the next few chapters!
******CaritheSapphireGoddess***** |
Author Feedback: Actually, this is a one-shot... Sorry to disappoint! Thank you for the review, though. :-) |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Drabble !
Wow that was a good one ... Hermione has a superman complex as well !
I really liked the way it was written, keep it up! |
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NousiaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
That was absolutely lovely!
"Harry James Power has a superman complex."
I think you mean "Potter," right?  |
Author Feedback: See, this is why you do NOT write fics at three in the morning - it results in embarrassing situations such as this.
Thank you very much for pointing it out! I fixed it. :-) |
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GryyphynSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
Never seen it stated like that before. Guess Hermione really does have a saving people, or just one person, thing too. |
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Beautifully written and an especially wonderful last line. I've never thought of Hermione as having a similar complex as Harry, but after reading her reasons for standing by his side, it actually makes a lot of sense. And by calling out Harry on his "saving people thing" in OotP, maybe she was projecting a little subconscious realization that she was exactly like him. Excellent! And pretty impressive that you came up with it at three in the morning! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/07
Wow, that was really interesting. I really thought it was great. Yay! I loved it. Great job. |
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JanusSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/07
I found this very amusing since I always thought that while Harry has a "saving people thing," she has a "saving Harry" thing. I really loved the way you examined her superman complex--it was well-written, espeically how depicted that she carries it out without knowing it.
Anyways, this was wonderful.  Thank you and hope to see more stories from you. |
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I know it says "short drabble" but do you have any plans to continue this? I really like the concept of Hermione investigating her own hero complex. Keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: At the moment I have no plans to do so. I think readers of The List would kill me if I did, anyway. *Laughs* But maybe sometime in the future I might, if inspiration strikes. Thanks for the review! :-) |
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