OMG!

This almost had me in tears!

Update this soon because I really wanna know what happens. I don't know what I would do if I lost any one I was close too.....

....I'd probably go insane. But update soon. This is gold.

~Harmony_4ever88

wow awsome fanfic i really thought harry had died you are really good at deceiving people good work

It was really good, although no offense, I thought it got off to a rocky start, but by the end I was like OMG when will this be updated again? Thanks for the good read.

Aw, I like that explanation! I'm glad Harry & Hermione are together. I just hope Ron and the others can get past their hurt at what Harry had to do and be happy.

Oooh, How mysterious!! You've got me hooked. I'm so curious to find out what's going on.

more please!!!! cuz, honestly, you can not leave us....well...me hanging like that. i must know what happens next!!!! update!!!

I liked this a lot and hope that there will be a chapter 3. I felt it was a little sad but most good fics are a little sad. Can't wait to see more work from you.

Wow that happened way too fast.

Seems like you extracted all the H/Hr moments from a couple of chapters in a book, and left the rest of the plot behind.

I did find what you posted, well written,but I would have liked to have read more.

Leaving Hermione practically comatose for months seemed a bit cruel. Yes I understand Harry's need for LV's supporters to believe he was dead, but it would have been fun for him to reveal himself to Hermione, and their attempts to keep it a total secret from their friends.

Clandestine meetings, and Ron thinking she's found someone else so soon after Harry's death, getting upset, and Hermione trying to talk her way out of it.

Sorry, here I am practically rewriting your story in my head!

Is this chapter the end?

really good so far. read ch-2 as well. 10/10. waiting anxiously fr ch-3

This fic has all the hallmarks of a superfantastic story. I salute you!

Magorian

awwee this storys really cute i love it!! its kinda sad though.. but good job on it!! cant wait for the next chapter =]]

Only read half the chapter... maybe closer to 1/4. Dumbly putting spells on people to make them seem dead? Right... I'd have preferred Harry being abducted by aliens, lol, that's more believable!

1) To whom was Hermione engaged? There was a lot of H/Hr fluff but Ron called Hermione 'love' just as Harry did. Kinda confusing...
2) I hate the fact that everyone seems to call her 'Mione'. It's not as romantic when Harry says it because it's being done to death. He might as well just call her by her name. That would have helped clarify with whom she was engaged.

this is a great story , a little confusing but stilla great story . i hope you continuie this story because ill will keep looking for your updates.

thank u very much,
D&G4-eva

i really like it so far, its an interesting concept. i wish i could come up with ideas like you guys do. keep up the good work.