AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/07
Awful, bloody awful; pink, roses, pictures; I am a boy an I would have never ever gotten to make such a barbie valentine. Which 16 year old bloke wants to stand with an arm full of roses in a ribbon-decorated room saying "I love you"?!? Beam me up, Scotty! I like to vanish in the ground! This is a story from a girl for just girls. We may be dull blokes, but we're blokes! Good story, but a girl's story. |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/07
I thought this one was cute and still held the innocence of the two.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/07
good story, but the rating should probably be bumped higher, just in case |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'll check it out. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/07
That was really cute. Lovely job. I really liked it. Great and very cute. I am glad that Ron wanted them to be happy even though that he liked Hermione. Great job. I thought it was brilliant! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm really glad that you liked it!  |
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BimrinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/07
Good little story so far. A little sugary for my taste but overall I enjoyed it quite a bit. Granted it is a V-Day fic so I imagine sugary is part of the game. Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Glad you enjoyed it! |
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This is a very heartwarming story, and I like it. Somewhere in the middle, though, there is a random question mark with a square around it. Yeah your spelling was good, and the fluff/eroticness/no smut made it a good story. |
Author Feedback: Hmmmmm...I hadn't noticed that when I read through it. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/07
"I know you have low self esteem..."
- Honestly, you cant just up and say things like that. That's right up there with, 'Do you think this dress makes me look fat? Er... is a cow fat?/You guys aren't planning a surprise party for me are you?" etc. Harry, thanks to how he was raised, is a lot more sensitive to other's feelings in that regard. I'd expect Hermione or Ron to just up and say something like that. lol
"I know you have low self esteem but.../I know you only just learned to walk upright but..."
Great story btw., it was a brilliant read. There were a few grammar mistakes but over all I liked it. |
Author Feedback: Yeah I'm very bad with grammer, but I can't seem to find a beta. Everytime I apply for one, or someone says they will beta for me, they never get back to me. *lol* Thanks for reading! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/04/07
This was a fantastic fic. Please continue it if you are game. I love it and it has so many possiblilities. I look forward to the next chapter. Oh, and by the way, your description of the love scene was perfection.
Magorian |
Author Feedback: Aww...thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading it. I don't really plan to continue at this moment, but if you have anything you'd like to see from it please feel free to let me know. It was actually the first love scene that I've ever written. Thanks again!!  |
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Somehow, Hermione always hates Valentine's day. Thank God Harry is always there to change her mind. Surprising was the fact they had sex so early... not that I mind. It was a beautiful and touching scene. I hope to read more stories from you,
sakura_txell |
Author Feedback: Like I said...this was my first ever HP fic...I have a story of ff.net called Mischief Managed. The link to my profile there should be in my bio here. It's a SS/Hr one, but if you enjoyed this one, you might enjoy that one as well. Thanks again! |
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That was great I couldn't help but smile the whole way through it  |
Author Feedback: Thanks!! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! |
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