kohlerSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 20/10/09
i love this story very much. It is one of my favorites. |
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I loved it! Great chapter again, can't wait for the next one!  |
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I loved it! Great chapter again, can't wait for the next one!  |
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I loved it! Great chapter again, can't wait for the next one! |
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I loved it! Great chapter again, can't wait for the next one! |
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I loved it! Great chapter again, can't wait for the next one!  |
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I loved it! Great chapter again, can't wait for the next one! |
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I loved it! Great chapter again, can't wait for the next one! |
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I loved it! Great chapter with an awsome plot, cant wait to move onto the next chapter! |
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gravacorSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 27/08/09
Just caught up reading on this story and I have really enjoyed it. I don't know if I can agree with all of the going along with their plans. I think if nothing else, Hermione would have thought of the difficulties that Harry would have had. I can see why they might have thought that, and I can really understand Harry's frustration and anger. It was touching when Harry admitted that he could never hate Hermione. Look forward to the next update. |
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N.O.C.Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 27/08/09
Hermione and Harry together again, woohoo! He still needs to be pissed off at the rest of them. He also needs to go after whoever did this to Hermione by himself and kick their butts.
Flashback scenes are very distractive to me, and I know you had to put a good deal of the original in here for it to make sense, but the longer they are, the more it detracts from the story in my opinion. Just a blurb here and there usually achieves the point that an author needs to make. Just an observation, please don't take it as critical.
Good job, and thanks for writing. |
Author Feedback: I agree the flashbacks are long; I tended to get carried away with them, 
However that was a crucial point in the story, there'll be less flashbacks from now on and they will be shorter.
Don't think Harry can forgive them completely. |
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I mean, I can't even tell you how much I love this. Hermione and Ron's arguments... how they matter now. Man. This story is such a brilliant dissection of the underbelly of the series. I mean, honestly. The psychological rammifications of their duties, fate, the actions of everyone else... Hermione knowing it... I just can't say enough. |
Author Feedback: Thank you for your reply 
You seem to really understand the story and the 'point' I'm trying to make about the psychological impact their actions had on them. It was kind of 'skipped' over in the books and I always thought Hermione (before Book 6 anyway) had the intelligence to know Harry wasn't commited to the war enough, I mean she was annoyed just when he didn't do his homework lol
Take Care
Radagast |
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