AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/07
The song is called "Cheek To Cheek" not "Dancing Cheek To Cheek," but don't worry, you got the artist correct! Just thought i should inform you about that little mistake! Other than that, good job! Keep it up!! |
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Aw, I love your Harry/Hermione scenes! Also, Hermione's explanation goes a long way in explaining her odd behavior in HBP. I hope you decide to continue with the story. |
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thanks for this short chapter - looking forward to reading the rest of the story in the future. keep up the good work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/07
Wow. That was awesome. It was written gently and subtly and great. It flowed so well almost like the night and the song. Great job.  |
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I love how this chapter flowed so smoothly. I love the interaction between Harry and Hermione, of how it surprisingly reminded me of their relationship pre-HBP  . It was weird having this evil grin waiting to see how you'd write Ginny, but she's relegated to the background (again  ).
Hope to read the next one soon! |
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SchokkiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/07
Oh, that was such a nice chapter!^^ Your summary didn't say much about the story, but anyways, I am looking forward to the next chapter! |
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It was kinfd of shocking hearing (or rather, reading) Harry speak those three words so easily. I don't think Harry would have difficulties feeling them, but actually saying them out loud? I don't think so.
However, it was a precious little piece of work. Quite optimistic, and simple... I loved it. And I liked your writing style.
Congrats, and until next time,
sakura_txell |
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